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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 39 |
Nov 25 |
Comment |
A good composition with impact and interest especially from the splashing waves and fog or mist.
I agree with the others, on processing tips.
You mentioned shooting in B&W, but looking at the original, I think I see colors.
Are you shooting in RAW, JPG or both formats?
I ask because when setting the camera to B&W, if using RAW, the image will be B&W on the camera LCD but will be color when down loaded. You would need to set the camera to shoot JPG or both RAW and JPG, and the JPG would be B&W and the Raw, color. That said, a JPG file will be very limited when processing. Converting the RAW and to B&W in processing might be a better choice. Hope this makes sense. This also holds true for the many Scene settings available on cameras, they will only apply to JPG images, not RAW. Here is a link that explains it in more detail, and better than I can, https://dearbubbles.com/2025/07/raw-vs-jpeg/. |
Nov 18th |
| 39 |
Nov 25 |
Comment |
The language of the bodies makes this a strong image. The conversion to B&W is especially strong over the color version.
I tend to agree with Paul, with one more suggestion. The square format tends to limit their movement, and I think a horizontal format might give them more room and therefore, impact. See what you think, I also added a stroke. |
Nov 18th |
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| 39 |
Nov 25 |
Comment |
A great story with an image to back it up. Very enjoyable when accompanied by the story. The image does hold a bit of its own without the story as well.
I would agree with removing the table in the lower right. If you are going to do anything more with it, I might tone down the bonnet, give it a bit mor contrast and add a vignette along with removing the table. See attached. |
Nov 18th |
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| 39 |
Nov 25 |
Comment |
A very strong image with great detail, and the trees add a good framing effect. The eyes make this image very strong and pull the viewer right to him. I agree with the group on moe room on the right, however, that is easily corrected in photoshop. See atached. It might be too much, but can be cropped. |
Nov 18th |
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| 39 |
Nov 25 |
Comment |
Do you live in MN? I was born and lived here most of my life and am now in Hanover MN.
Great shot of this old building. I have images of the Gold Medal Flour building from across the river and images of the Pillsbury's Best Flour building.
The lighting, contrast and details are well done. A definite subject for B&W and the conversion here is high impact and interest.
I would like to see more of the building on the right side as it has great interest with the crumbling walls. Maybe a little more contrast and less brightness in the Gold Medal Flour sign. Might also crop from the bottom to eliminate some of the negative space. Very strong. |
Nov 18th |
| 39 |
Nov 25 |
Comment |
Thanks all, good comments. |
Nov 18th |
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