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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 34 |
Feb 22 |
Comment |
My suggestion is to darken and soften the whole scene with the exception of the Bride and her table. I'm not convinced it worked but it was an idea.
You're brave to be going that far to the edge with the bride, which is fine by me, but unfortunately, you've lost the "Bride" look. It could be a lady in a white dress sitting at the table. Frans's idea of moving her out and standing brings back the "Bride". I would move her in front of the chair that Fran used. If the Bride and table appear soft in this adjusted image, she was sharp when I exported the file, I tried to correct without success. |
Feb 19th |
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| 34 |
Feb 22 |
Comment |
Fran the dark left hand side accentuates the flow of moths. My small suggestion is to add to the your processing pain and precision and gradually decrease saturation or alternatively brightem or increase exposure gradually in the moths as they go out into the distance to increase the perceived depth. I can appreciate the labour of love in creating your cloud of moths. Your hours of processing have paid off. |
Feb 19th |
| 34 |
Feb 22 |
Comment |
Jan I struggled at first as the image was enveloped into the black background. I created a frame with cards on my monitor and then your image really jumped. It has strong moody feel and the bright light top left is the beginning of a downward vertical line to the bottom bright patch. As Steve commented it will make a wonderful print. Nice work. |
Feb 19th |
| 34 |
Feb 22 |
Comment |
Sorry to hear about the pain you are living with. I wish you the best for your recovery and will add you to the prayer list |
Feb 19th |
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