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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 52 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
I am very partial to black backgrounds, and I admire your patience in rendering this image the way you have. The butterfly really pops out from the background. I too noticied that the antennae to the bak seem to disappear except for the tip, which is a little disconcerting, but I think it would be an easy fix. |
Oct 17th |
| 52 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
I think the Mantis looks like he is suspended in amber, but remains very much alive. The edges are so dark I can't tell for certain where the frame edges are, but I do get the feeling that it is cropped too tight on the left and the right. The back leg being out of focus is a bit of a probmen im my opinon. You might try to use the Radial Filter in LR to increase the contrast and clarity to see if that makes it look sharper. |
Oct 17th |
| 52 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
The crop feels too tight to me as well. Also, in my opinion the subject should be brightened up a bit. In the newest updates of Lightroom, you can select the masking tool (round cirecle on the right) then choose "select subject" and it does a masterful job of making the selection. Then all you have to do is move the exosure slider a bit until you get the Booby more separated from the background. |
Oct 17th |
| 52 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
I think this image would make a perfect holiday greeting card. The chipmunk is sharp and catching him posed on branches with red berries was a stroke of luck - a decisive moment. I agree with the suggestons the others have made. Increasing the exposure will brighten the image and I might also suggest tweaking the White Balance a bit to see if it enhances the image. See what you think. |
Oct 17th |
| 52 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
To me the butterfly looks sharp and you have captured it on a perfect flower specimen. So often they are on flowers that are partially spent. I think the background complements the subject very well and is not at all distracting. My only suggeston is to lighten the thorax and abdomen a bit.
This is not a Monarch butterfly. It's an Eastern Tiger Swallowtail.
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Oct 17th |
| 52 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
I think you have captured a very sharp portrait of this guy. They behave similarly in my backyard and I have yet to sucessfully capture an image, so I know how quick your reaction time had to be. I like the way he peeks around that tree because it suggests just how cagey they are as they pop out from behind cover. Well done. |
Oct 17th |
| 52 |
Oct 22 |
Reply |
Thanks for pointing that out, Pam. They look like artifacts, which is really puzzling as that is usually a result of post-processing, and I did so little to that background.
I wish I had seen that before I posted it, but I guess I was in too much of a hurry.
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Oct 17th |
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