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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 22 |
Dec 20 |
Reply |
I thought about trying to remove the vine too but then decided I felt it was a part of the "oldness" of the image. |
Dec 25th |
| 22 |
Dec 20 |
Reply |
I'll have to try it again. I couldn't get it to look like yours. |
Dec 13th |
| 22 |
Dec 20 |
Comment |
Very nice. I felt it could use a little more "punch" so I tried adding a little contrast and detail. I agree about the composition and I also love the sky. |
Dec 11th |
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| 22 |
Dec 20 |
Comment |
Good job! Love the colors. I wasn't too sure I like the tilt but I guess it works okay. I'm also not sure if the wavy lettering against the straight line of the road. It is nice though and would make a good card. |
Dec 11th |
| 22 |
Dec 20 |
Comment |
I would perhaps even crop it more. Love the mood you captured here. I would also increase the rim light. Hmm, looks like the same crop as Joe's...oh well. |
Dec 11th |
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| 22 |
Dec 20 |
Reply |
I flipped it also because Joe liked it that way. :) |
Dec 11th |
 |
| 22 |
Dec 20 |
Comment |
I'm going to agree with Mike. I like the original better and I find the area inside the window on the final has more white which distracts from the jug.
How about a combination of both? |
Dec 11th |
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| 22 |
Dec 20 |
Comment |
I tried to imitate what you said but couldn't find the mosaic filter. I wanted to see what it would look like if the crop hadn't been made so much. I'd like to see it still lean and a little off to the right side instead of straight on.
Overall it's a neat abstract with good colors and interesting texture with the mosaic lines. Nice job. |
Dec 11th |
| 22 |
Dec 20 |
Comment |
I'd like to see a little more detail in the fence planks. It's an interesting image with the fence line and the reflection. It is a hard one to work on and I think you did a nice job with it. Like Joe's rendition too - very creative. |
Dec 11th |
| 22 |
Dec 20 |
Reply |
Cranked up the contrast. I think it looks too garish but it is more "artsy". |
Dec 11th |
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| 22 |
Dec 20 |
Reply |
I could not upload it to the bulletin board so I emailed it to all of you...like it or not. LOL
If the guides don't show up, let me know. I hope they will or it's all in vain. :) |
Dec 9th |
| 22 |
Dec 20 |
Reply |
Actually, I have already made a notecard. :) I have a template for it and use Red River's 7x10 glossy notecard stock. I'm going to try and post the file to the Bulletin Board section if I can. I don't know if I can email it but if the bulletin board doesn't work, I'll try if anyone wants it. |
Dec 9th |
| 22 |
Dec 20 |
Reply |
I probably got a little heavy handed with the detail but I wanted to make it look more like a drawing and bring out the details in the leaves. |
Dec 8th |
6 comments - 7 replies for Group 22
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6 comments - 7 replies Total
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