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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 22 |
Jul 20 |
Reply |
Thanks Larry - I don't know if I had a mentor, Jon Fishback was the course leader.
I'm planning to work on the improvements everyone is suggesting. I have the same vision but am still working on how to achieve it. |
Jul 26th |
| 22 |
Jul 20 |
Comment |
I agree with the labels but it does make it "genuine". I sort of wish there was another element as I tend to go back and forth between the two. It is an interesting image with good coloring. Nice job. |
Jul 26th |
| 22 |
Jul 20 |
Comment |
"Deborah Ann Harry is an American singer, songwriter, model and actress, known as the lead singer of the new wave band Blondie." She is also from Florida.
I wonder about burning in the cement some to bring even more attention to the house? Definitely an eye catcher with all the colors. |
Jul 16th |
| 22 |
Jul 20 |
Reply |
I like the mountains too! |
Jul 13th |
| 22 |
Jul 20 |
Reply |
Sorry if you all received multiple emails - I had trouble posting the updated image. |
Jul 13th |
| 22 |
Jul 20 |
Comment |
I like the story telling of this image as well. The composition is nice with the artist positioned in the lower right. I think the backpack with the equipment in it (looks like rags hanging out to me) is part of the story. Backpacking into a solitary point to paint the scene.
I tried adding some to the bottom and burning in the red some but I do like having the red in the image. |
Jul 13th |
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| 22 |
Jul 20 |
Reply |
Thanks Al. It did take some time but I think it was worth it. Sometimes I get an idea and just have to keep working on it. I had a harder time figuring out how to blend the staircase into the clouds - couldn't remember how I did one of my fireworks shots. |
Jul 9th |
| 22 |
Jul 20 |
Reply |
I agree. I might try and make some changes if I can. |
Jul 6th |
| 22 |
Jul 20 |
Comment |
Cute! Nice composition with the three horses and lots of color. We have a state-wide mandate for masks here in IL.
Prayers for you with the knee surgery and may you have a quick recovery.
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Jul 6th |
| 22 |
Jul 20 |
Comment |
It's an interesting technique. I feel the texture detracts from the caterpillar though it does create a kind of surreal mood. I'd like the caterpillar to be the subject so I cropped to him and then reversed it. You did great getting him so sharp. Nice job. |
Jul 2nd |
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| 22 |
Jul 20 |
Comment |
Quite nice! I like that you kept three buildings as it makes for nice composition. I think I'd like to see a little more contrast especially in the slats of the barns - maybe more details? Overall you've taken a "record shot" and turned it into something competition worthy in my opinion. |
Jul 1st |
6 comments - 5 replies for Group 22
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| 36 |
Jul 20 |
Comment |
Beautiful moody image. I love the lighting and the sort of desolate feel. Reminds me of our summer home on Lake Michigan that ended up partially in the lake. The empty pilings are a reminder of what once was. |
Jul 26th |
1 comment - 0 replies for Group 36
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7 comments - 5 replies Total
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