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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 22 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
Brought the image into Topaz Adjust and used the crisp setting. Also cropped a little more on the right and added some saturation to the lighthouse roofs. Really good composition to start with. |
Oct 21st |
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| 22 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
Here is my redo - I added some saturation in the green and took down the whites. |
Oct 21st |
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| 22 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
John, Hope you don't mind - I played a little with the saturation in the grassy areas and did a crop on the left. |
Oct 21st |
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| 22 |
Oct 17 |
Reply |
A reminder to our group - you can visit other groups and make comments if you wish. It's always nice to have comments from outside our own group. Thanks Beverly. |
Oct 16th |
| 22 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
Perhaps we could make something like this for one of our special topic months next year? (no, Joe, you can't use this one...LOL)
I like the way you used the fish and made it colorful. It's a great image. |
Oct 13th |
| 22 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
I agree with Mike and Jerry - I'd crop the left building up to where it goes to the lower portion. This will move the subject building off-center. Good lines in the road and I don't think the crop would change much there.
I also see a slight green tint to the image. I'd like to see the flowerbeds and grass more saturated. I like the details you've brought out in the building and even the people. Almost like a sketch. Overall, nice work especially from a scanned image! |
Oct 13th |
| 22 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
Waterfalls can be tricky. I like the composition of this one and the way you have processed it for details. What I'd like to see different is the coloring. It appears a little too green cast. I might try a "redo" tonight - if I can get my own image up. :) |
Oct 11th |
| 22 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
I love the way you've brought out the color in the barn, removed that piece in the foreground and removed that wire running across.
For me, cropping the right has removed the feel of a frame created by the tree. Now I only see a part of the tree. It also cuts off the entry to the barn which shows in the original.
The "HDR" look in the sky bothers me. While the technique is good, I would like to see the original sky. It already has so much definition without the over-saturated colors that show in the final.
For an "old" barn, perhaps a sepia tone would work? BW? I like what you have though there might be other options to play with. |
Oct 5th |
| 22 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
I rather like the color of the sky in the original. This one looks a little too blue for the subdued lighting. Also, by cropping on the left, I'm seeing less area for the ships to move into. I like the way you cropped out the bits of tree on the right.
Perhaps adding some saturation to the ships to make them stand out more? More details? Overall it's a well composed image and pleasant to look at. Nice job. |
Oct 4th |
| 22 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
I agree with Mike - lovely image - and I like both versions. This is one case where I might not want to see the stroke. It sort of sets off the lower right corner where the hand was. There really isn't anything about the image that needs the "containment" of a stroke - IMHO. Also, I'd like to see some blurring of the right side of the board so it looks a little more like the left side. Picky points for a very nice image. |
Oct 4th |
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