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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 76 |
Jun 24 |
Comment |
A flower or a will-o'-the-wisp - a glimmer of light that flutters in the air? I like the impression of flame, the blurred image, the softness of the colors.
Everyone can interpret it differently. I like it this way. |
Jun 17th |
| 76 |
Jun 24 |
Comment |
What counts for me is the impact of the image: it represents what you wanted to say. So thanks to "lynx eyes" for the sensor spots, I didn't even see them. A little tidying up and it'll be perfect for the mood and cropping.
Bravo |
Jun 17th |
| 76 |
Jun 24 |
Comment |
You've done this herdsman proud. His face is particularly interesting for its expression, and the cigarette gives him composure.
You've added just the right amount of light to make the eyes stand out a little, while remaining realistic. The Camargue sky can be blue like this, but it can also be paler. Don't you think you're drawing too much attention to the sky rather than the subject?
In any case, it's a beautiful portrait that appeals.
Careful right/left, it's looking into the past. I'd have reversed it to see...
Bravo for this image.
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Jun 17th |
| 76 |
Jun 24 |
Comment |
There's a lovely light on this plant. I like the fact that there are three flowers.
The greens are well rendered, which is not easy, I agree.
My only advice would be to darken the top left leaf slightly. It's a little too bright and draws the eye. The flow of the image is good, allowing the eye to return to the flowers and end up on this bright spot.
Have you checked that the sap is red? I wish I'd been there to see it. My sister lives in Arizona, so I've often been in contact with them and had the opportunity to learn more about their culture.
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Jun 17th |
| 76 |
Jun 24 |
Comment |
Beautiful work and very nice rendering of the body and materials.
Well done.
I've already directed models, professional and otherwise. They want to show what they want, not what the photographer wants. Some models strike a pose, don't hold it and change position.
The hardest part is the hands and their position. You've managed the problem. To avoid this, she should not have leaned further on her elbow; the hand would have slid more naturally perhaps. But your result is very good and above all very pretty to look at. |
Jun 10th |
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