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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 26 |
Jan 25 |
Comment |
As others have stated, this is a dynamite image. Perhaps as Mervyn suggested, a slight crop on the right might help. |
Jan 10th |
| 26 |
Jan 25 |
Comment |
I like your concept. I did not see the pregnant woman until you pointed it out. You do have talent for finding interesting abstracts.
I think that making the shadows deeper might have more impact. I selected the subject (the tree) and added the foreground, and then the inverse. I then applied darkening to the inverse selection, as this had little impact on the wall but more so on the shadows. (and it also darkened the flowers, although I did not think they were too bight before.) See what you think. |
Jan 6th |
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| 26 |
Jan 25 |
Comment |
I agree with Kirsti about the softness of the drop and above it, but I think that with a sharpening program like Topaz Sharpen AI, you can fix that. Nice simple design. |
Jan 6th |
| 26 |
Jan 25 |
Comment |
I like this technique. Have you tried putting a mask on it, and just painting back in with very low brush settings, some of the detail and texture of the balloons? (Not a lot, just enough to bring back a small amount in the center of each.) |
Jan 6th |
| 26 |
Jan 25 |
Comment |
Excellent. Positioning,, the expression, and choosing very dark tones for the rest all work together. |
Jan 6th |
| 26 |
Jan 25 |
Comment |
Considering the difficulty of back lighting, you did a marvelous job of creating this scene. I noticed the boy is clipped on the left, but cropping him puts too much tension on the pump position. However he is a not a major point of distraction. |
Jan 6th |
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