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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 26 |
May 20 |
Comment |
Very nice composition and color contrast. I agree with Jose about following the s curve all the way to the fascinating sky. I would suggest opening the shadows in the back cliffs, so that we can follow the curve all the way to the end. |
May 10th |
| 26 |
May 20 |
Comment |
Eliminating the tree growing out of the elephant eliminated the only critique I could offer up. |
May 10th |
| 26 |
May 20 |
Comment |
I like your rendering. You took a flat image, and gave it some contrast and interest. I agree that cloning outlet the two bright rocks by the edge would be useful. I might try toning down the grass edge slightly, as it almost draws my attention too much. (It is a nice s curve leading line, but may be too powerful. |
May 10th |
| 26 |
May 20 |
Comment |
I always appreciate how careful you are to make interior shots as symmetrical as possible. And you did a great job of eliminating keystoning. Perhaps I could see a very slight reduction in brightness. |
May 10th |
| 26 |
May 20 |
Comment |
I agree with Jose about darkening the lighter area by the neck. Would it be possible to darken the rock some more without it appearing unnaturally too dark? |
May 10th |
| 26 |
May 20 |
Comment |
I would not crop the bottom; I like the composition. I also like the dark moodiness of the landscape. I would like to see the original, as it appears the contrast may be too high, causing the dark shadows to block up. |
May 10th |
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