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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 26 |
Oct 18 |
Comment |
Nice creative approach. I would suggest adding the original as a bottom layer, and masking in that red eye, which I think is more interesting. You could even selectively paint in some of the black details from the original. See what you think. |
Oct 16th |
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| 26 |
Oct 18 |
Comment |
I like this composition, and infrared does create some wonderful black and white. I think the foreground may be a little too bright, and if it was darkened, would help to frame this better. I like the bottom foreground material, but just feel that toning that done would help. |
Oct 16th |
| 26 |
Oct 18 |
Comment |
Great find. I like the saturated colors of the wall and the composition. And I like Brenda's suggestion for a creative approach with some grunge or painterly add in, as I think this would create another image that would work. |
Oct 16th |
| 26 |
Oct 18 |
Comment |
I agree with Jose; the red area on top is distracting, and I would recommend cropping/cloning to remove it. Not too punched up for me. Might also consider toning down the bright right corner. This adds to depth, but may be too bright. |
Oct 16th |
| 26 |
Oct 18 |
Comment |
Pink works!
Love the results. I feel the right wall is okay, but might consider cropping the bright left edge wall, as I feel this may lead the eye there. |
Oct 16th |
| 26 |
Oct 18 |
Comment |
I agree somewhat with Albert. Either clone or crop the tree leaning out of the frame on the right, and crop some on the left. (I think the tree is a natural blocker/framer, but the bright small tree refocuses the attention. Leaving a small amount fixes that, I believe.) This is a nice scene, and for fun sometime, Belinda's suggestion of something on the path could work well. When I saw this the first time, it begged to me to have sun rays. So I cheated, and used the Sun Ray filter in Luminar. |
Oct 16th |
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| 26 |
Oct 18 |
Comment |
Thanks to those that mentioned the blue sky patch. I did not realize the distraction until it was pointed out. |
Oct 16th |
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