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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 14 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
Hi Kamal,
What a lovely, serene feel in this image. I like how you cropped out much of the foreground to help us focus on the beautiful sunset and the interesting silhouettes.
Tom made a good point about toning down the sun just a bit. I think that would help this image a lot.
Great job!
Karen |
Oct 20th |
| 14 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
Hello Xiao,
I love how you have darkened the image from the original to create an intimate feel with that beautiful lighting on her face.
I like the re-work, but that book still seems too bright to me. The lighting and her beautiful face are so stunning that you don't want to distract the eye from going straight there and staying.
Also, I think I would clone the two children out. They don't add to the story and just seem to be another distraction for the viewer.
Great work and a beautiful image!
Karen |
Oct 20th |
| 14 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
Hi Tom,
Beautiful image! Those droplets and the stamen are very sharp. The circular composition leads your eye around and around the image.
Nice job!
Karen |
Oct 20th |
| 14 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
Hi Greg,
You certainly captured the moment in this great portrait.
I agree that it would be nice to have a bit more room on the left since that is the direction of his gaze. The white lines are a bit too white, and you might want to hit that bright spot in the upper right corner to burn it down some - or clone it so it's more even with the rest of the background.
Great job!
Karen |
Oct 20th |
| 14 |
Oct 22 |
Reply |
Hi Tom,
Yep - I missed that bright light. I will tone that down a bit and try the vignette suggested earlier.
Great feedback.
Thanks
Karen |
Oct 20th |
| 14 |
Oct 22 |
Reply |
Hi Kamal,
Thanks - and I agree with both you and Greg. I'll give that a try.
Karen |
Oct 20th |
| 14 |
Oct 22 |
Reply |
Great idea! I will do that.
Thanks!
Karen |
Oct 20th |
| 14 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
Hi Ingrid,
What a gorgeous shot! I love the color and the simplicity of the design. It certainly says "Fall".
I can't think of a thing I would change.
Nice work!
Karen |
Oct 20th |
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