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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 15 |
Apr 21 |
Comment |
Hi Kirsti, this presents well and looks as if it was intentionally created as a graphic design rather a documentary photograph. The blurred tree and doorway blend with the texture of the wall to create this effect. There is a shape just to the right of the tree trunk where the wall meets the ground. At first I thought this was a little alien, but I think it is a plant. It is a bit distracting and I suggest you consider removing it. Very interesting image. |
Apr 21st |
| 15 |
Apr 21 |
Comment |
Hi Jeri, this makes an immediate impact because of the intense colors, good job. I like how the petals cradle the center and I like the softness of the petals (there is just enough detail without being too sharp - it gives a silky appearance). |
Apr 21st |
| 15 |
Apr 21 |
Comment |
Hi Rick, I really enjoy looking at this photograph, it draws me into the scene. I agree with the comments about lighting and perspective, also the color is very pleasing. In addition, your design of the frame around the picture adds a lot to the presentation. |
Apr 21st |
| 15 |
Apr 21 |
Comment |
Hi Linda, this is a good example of a photograph taken at the right moment. The woman's expression says it all and the title is perfect. You really got her attention, and I imagine you did not take a second photograph (I know I would not have). I think it would help if you could darken the window a little bit. |
Apr 21st |
| 15 |
Apr 21 |
Comment |
Hi Bruce, what a great success! My immediate impression was of a very serene and beautiful image which was light and airy. The background color is perfect. I suggest you try flipping it horizontally and see if you like how it reads from left to right. |
Apr 21st |
| 15 |
Apr 21 |
Comment |
Hi Joan, good job on capturing this fleeting moment. The boys are really focused on their leader and were not distracted by your presence. Choosing black-and-white emphasizes that this is a serious discussion. I prefer the original crop, and I agree with Linda that it might help to darken the two bright areas so that they maintain the character of Cuba, without drawing the eye away from the main subject. |
Apr 21st |
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