Activity for User 1396 - Fran McFadzen - mcfadzef@yahoo.com.au

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34 Feb 21 Comment I do like that muffler on the goose's neck. Lots of story there. Fairytale... In my opinion, the house could be a little softer so that it looks more as if it is far away. Feb 28th
34 Feb 21 Comment The red Gerbera flowers dominate the image, but I find them a little uncomfortably placed. I see that you want them to stand out, but I think that the change of texture from the swirly background to the lightly textured Gerberas seems odd. Feb 28th
34 Feb 21 Comment I see what you are intending, with the distinct layers. I wonder if they are too distinct though. On second thoughts, it might be the swamp bit that is odd because all of the other layers are grassy and flowery. More work, I think. Feb 28th
34 Feb 21 Comment It looks a bit Escher to me. Showing impossible perspectives. I like that you have totally created the background sky and ground as the location for your fantasy. Feb 28th
34 Feb 21 Comment I agree with Georgianne. The head of the girl looks out of place and a bit 'stuck on top". I wonder if something of her shoulders would help to locate her better within the scene, by making her look as if she is sitting behind the sheep. Feb 28th
34 Feb 21 Comment Interesting image. I like that you have the eyes looking through from under the net. But I am not too sure if the masks are adding to the story. Feb 28th
34 Feb 21 Reply Did you do all that work and forget to post it?
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