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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 52 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
Nice capture and post work: my only suggestions are that since you pushed a lot of edits already would be to add a catchlight in the eye and alter the crop to portrait cutting out more of the bottom leaves and giving the hummer some head space. |
Sep 11th |
| 52 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
Very pretty capture and lovely post work: my only suggestions is to perhaps crop out about half of the foreground: I think it clutters things up and since you want to emphasize the expanse it would elongate the landscape and allow the viewer's eye to read more left to right. |
Sep 11th |
| 52 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
Nice crisp detail and strong story, but I had to look at the original and your exposition to sort out what animal was the base for the Oxpecker. Consider cropping so both rhino ears are visible and then masking the bright background down to alleviate the glare. I played about a bit and came up with this suggestion. |
Sep 11th |
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| 52 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
I like your post work to bring out more hues and shading. My only suggestion, which I seem to be saying a lot this month, would be too crop tighter to create a stronger composition with the mid-ground trees. Here's what I mean.
Also....very Bob Ross -- in a lovely way!
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Sep 11th |
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| 52 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
Nice capture and I agree the darks work well. My only suggestion would be to crop even tighter to remove the veritcal branch on the left.
Example with a flip just for fun. |
Sep 11th |
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