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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 99 |
Jun 23 |
Comment |
Hi Kathleen, Nice to meet you.
My first take away is - the grocery shopper is well dressed, but has no basket or cart; the store looks immaculate and well stocked. The image is well lit and the subject is centered; the deli counter takes me out of the
image, but on the way brings the cashier to my eye.
An excellent environs image. |
Jun 13th |
| 99 |
Jun 23 |
Comment |
Hi Linda, Nice to meet you.
An excellent night capture. Not sure if I could offer any advice other than what the Group has touched upon.
Pre-visualize and take a lot of shots with different settings. |
Jun 13th |
| 99 |
Jun 23 |
Comment |
Hi Peter, Nice to meet you.
Not to duplicate other comments - I think your image is an excellent capture of life - cityscape and seascape. Busy, but interesting; several scenes within one. Excellent usage of leading lines throughout; the cloudy skies and sea cliffs aid your eye exiting the image. |
Jun 13th |
| 99 |
Jun 23 |
Comment |
Hi Gerard, Nice to meet you.
To me your image is technically perfect; excellent tonal coverage - white/gray/blacks. The stone building identifies with the strong New England personalities. The building also has potential for other photo ops if flowers were added to the two urns(?); and if the two lamps were night lit. |
Jun 13th |
| 99 |
Jun 23 |
Comment |
Hi Barbara, Nice meeting you. I feel very fortunate being admitted to a Group that demonstrates exceptional photography
knowledge and can express their critiques in a precise written manner.
Your image is enjoyable and unique. The capture of the horse looking through the fence rails is seldom seen. Perhaps the horse had an apple in mind.
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Jun 13th |
| 99 |
Jun 23 |
Reply |
Hi Barbara,
Thank you for your comments. Older trees are my favorites -
they don't move as fast... |
Jun 13th |
| 99 |
Jun 23 |
Reply |
Hi Peter, Your comments are well taken. With a bit more time on my part and a visit to PS the image would have been a bit cleaner; and a larger negative conversion size, etc.
My pre-visualization was to isolate the tree alone as the subject; but foot traffic was heavy and time short. The
present presentation was decided afterwards - as a addition to my tree collection/portfolio - as a print. Never considered a Card - Christmas; but the idea has merit. |
Jun 13th |
| 99 |
Jun 23 |
Reply |
Hi Gerald, Thank you for your critique and I will revisit the negative (breathing) space issue. |
Jun 13th |
| 99 |
Jun 23 |
Comment |
Thank you Barbara for your comments and I appreciate your excellent contributions to this image |
Jun 13th |
6 comments - 3 replies for Group 99
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6 comments - 3 replies Total
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