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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 37 |
Jun 24 |
Comment |
I think I might be at the limits on the bird on the left. I would be better to do a little unsaturation of the dirt bank than saturating the already colorful birds--for which there was no tinkering. |
Jun 17th |
| 37 |
Jun 24 |
Comment |
thanks
I have been trying to figure out how many bits of grass, etc. to remove. I already darkened some. I didn't touch the saturation. |
Jun 7th |
| 37 |
Jun 24 |
Comment |
Nice pose, crisp shot from talon to beak and nice clarity on the branch it's resting on. I am a little troubled by the big branch leading through the bird. I'm not quite sure it works as a leading line. Or a some background darkening and more blur in that area. A couple of bright spots here and there to tone down, particularly the bright yellow on the upper right edge, and the lower left corner. I'd also clone out the bit of branch in the lower right corner or just move the crop in a little |
Jun 6th |
| 37 |
Jun 24 |
Comment |
Nice colors. I would trying expanding the canvas on top and cloning the tip of the other rose so the point does not hit the top of the photo. I would get rid of the brown whatever In the upper left corner, I might darken the background a tad more and sharpen the rose a little |
Jun 6th |
| 37 |
Jun 24 |
Comment |
Nice idea and fun I would like to hear how it was done. I would remove the green underneath the thing holding the egg. |
Jun 6th |
| 37 |
Jun 24 |
Comment |
A good idea. Since this is a studio shot, I'd go back to get everything crisp The cookies should be sharp and the ones on the right aren't. The upper left of the glass somewhat blends with the cookie next to it--some kind of blur. There's also a line through the glass, sweeping from the lower left toward the upper right. I think this might be the impact of the layer of cloth behind the glass causing that change in color in the milk. It seems to me the upper part of the glass should be crystal clear--I don't know if there's humidity on it or a smudge. I think it would be great if the rim were tack sharp and the glass were clear enough cloth could be seen unobstructed behind it. I would experiment with light coming from different directions because that may be an issue This is worth working on. |
Jun 6th |
| 37 |
Jun 24 |
Comment |
Really nice and I like have the blur on the right to show motion, along with freezing drops. I am not sure you need the monkey all the way down to the water. The story is the head. I would try cropping above the gray on the chest. It makes the head very dramatic. The body of water still shows a lot. I would try some light sharpening |
Jun 6th |
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