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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 37 |
Nov 23 |
Comment |
I'm trying to figure out if I would crop from the left I have mixed feelings. I generally like the photo--composition and colors Just not sure how much you need on the left.
I definitely would clone out that bright spot to the left of the flowers and in the willow tree. I'll get back to this after thinking about crops. |
Nov 22nd |
| 37 |
Nov 23 |
Comment |
Great expression on the guitarists face I really like this. Nice and sharp and good colors
I would crop on the left to eliminate what looks like another door and have it end with the brown stone around the other door I'd also crop down about a half inch on the top. that would eliminate that corner of the ceiling.
I think there is a problem in that the lines lead into the bright area on the sidewalk. I'm not good at burning but I would darken that whole area because otherwise it's the brightest area on the photo and immediately attracts the eye. |
Nov 22nd |
| 37 |
Nov 23 |
Comment |
Very good shot in terms of story and interesting mixtures of color and texture. I would clone out some shoe tips on the lower left.
I tried the darkening Howard suggested, but the upper left seems blown out and didn't darken so I decided to crop stout.
I cropped down to eliminate most of the light areas on the wood on the upper right. . I don't think you need so much of the reddish-brown ceiling on the upper left. Be nice if you can figure out how to create a toe tip for the boy with the light greenshirt in the for ground and put a little space beneath him. I also cloned the lower right corner to not have a slice of different color and matched the surrounding wood.
I did not try creating that toe tip. Sounds like a lot of work. |
Nov 22nd |
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