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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 37 |
May 22 |
Comment |
Howard
You are right. I think this isn't the brightest version I had.
thanks |
May 20th |
| 37 |
May 22 |
Comment |
Part of me wants to cut off the pilings and the blue water and leave just the colors and make it abstract. I feel like I'm getting pulled to the bottom as one subject and to the colors on an another. I think it's great as an abstract. |
May 16th |
| 37 |
May 22 |
Comment |
Excellent sharpness on the wasp and good color, I agree on getting rid of the bit of greenery. The focus seems to fall off before the wasp and especially to the right. I might crop out the bottom of the flower, cutting off 25-30 percent of the yellow center, leaving it to concentrate more on the wasp |
May 15th |
| 37 |
May 22 |
Comment |
I think this needs a more definitive focus on what the subject is. I also see the purplish cast in the shadows. Maybe I need my glasses, but the windows on the two big buildings don't seem sharp |
May 15th |
| 37 |
May 22 |
Comment |
I go with the crowd on the selection of BW as the way to go. Nice detail and effect. I think I would dark the sky areas showing through. I would clone out some of the stray, tall grasses, particularly one to the left of the rear wheel; one that extends from the bottom to right side of the rear wheel; a couple just the right of th front wheel and extending to over the radiator; on one in the lower right leading up to the right center of the page.
Maybe just darken everything but the tractor Whatever is on the left--is that big tire? And it looks like there's a cloth beneath it? A bit distracting. As I looked at it more, I started wondering what they were. |
May 15th |
| 37 |
May 22 |
Comment |
Beautiful. I can't thin of much to add. I'd have to agree with cropping off the bottom. |
May 15th |
| 37 |
May 22 |
Comment |
No stacking. It's real water. That's what dry my eye. thanks |
May 9th |
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