Activity for User 137 - Jon Allanson - joncallanson@gmail.com

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27 Sep 23 Comment Your focus and shutter speed were spot on, capturing the bird in flight. However I agree with Brad that it would be better if its wings wherefore spread out. Sep 20th
27 Sep 23 Comment A well seen image, very graphical with the squares of the windows in the background. I agree that the 2 trees on the left are not adding anything important to the image. I think I would prefer the image not to have all the roof structure, as the green underside draws my eye away from the 3 trees near the base. Sep 20th
27 Sep 23 Comment I really like the image you have created, with its softer mix of watercolour colours helped by the falling rain, creating a texture screen. There are couple of paper white areas near the top of the image which would benefit from being filled in. Sep 20th
27 Sep 23 Comment I like the way that the buildings and silos create a good background to the two vehicles, which look as if they have just been abandoned there. To me the red truck is a little tight on the right hand side. It would not have been very difficult to add a strip of brickwork and grass to increase the spacing. I also feel that some extra punch could be added to the touch to make it stand out more. Sep 20th
27 Sep 23 Comment Excellent colours and motion, I would prefer it with a little light in the sky rather than it just being black. I suggest that a narrow key line would improve the image by creating an edge to it. Sep 20th
27 Sep 23 Comment An interesting image, I like the firework display. The right-hand side though a little dark, clearly indicates the outline of the traditional building there. I feel that orange object bottom left is a potential distraction. Sep 20th
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