Activity for User 137 - Jon Allanson - joncallanson@gmail.com

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27 Aug 23 Comment Sorry to read about your accident and I wish you a speedy recovery. Aug 17th
27 Aug 23 Comment I really like this frog looking straight into the camera. I feel that you have got enough depth of field and needed a smaller aperture or moving a little further back so that the focus does not fall off so quickly. Aug 17th
27 Aug 23 Comment A relaxing image, which ends the twigs in front of the boat removing, and possibly lighting up the sail a little. Aug 17th
27 Aug 23 Comment I can appreciate what you were trying to achieve, but I feel that it is too dark and face is far too contrasty. We also need to see some small degree of separation between her dress and the background. Aug 17th
27 Aug 23 Comment A very good image with several good planes of recession. I think that I would have cropped off some of the sky. Aug 17th
27 Aug 23 Comment Looking at her sleeve it appears that there is a fairly strong light coming from the far side of her, which has made part of her hand and neck etc to be in shadow. It appears to me that you tried to lighten the face little more, but in the process you have created quite an artefact around her nose. I feel that the image would be greatly improved by removing the two heavy pieces of fence in the sky. Aug 17th
27 Aug 23 Comment The parent bird is about the right size in the frame, though it would benefit from ten moving some of the empty space at the top. Laurens removing the shell has greatly improved the image. Aug 17th
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