Activity for User 137 - Jon Allanson - joncallanson@gmail.com

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27 Jul 23 Reply I have reprocessed the original file as a colour image and made it into a 15 inch print on a soft matt paper. I now prefer the colour version myself. Jul 13th
27 Jul 23 Comment I like that you have concentrated on a small piece of the architecture rather than trying ti get the whole building in. the positioning of the spire on a third has helped to make it the main point of interest. I would consider cropping off the 2 dormer windows on the left to make a square format image. to me the 2 windows going into the frame topleft and bottom left are possible distraction. Jul 10th
27 Jul 23 Comment You get some incredible floods in the outback following heavy rainfall. I think that monochrome and the use of a letterbox format really suits this image. Your 2 second exposure has worked very well it has smoothed to some of the detail in the water but still coveys a sense of movement. Jul 10th
27 Jul 23 Comment You have captured the soft green colouration of the spring foliage, but to me there is no real centre of interest and my eye constantly wanders about the image. Jul 10th
27 Jul 23 Comment I like you idea of including the photo-bomb cat, but it needs to be sharper. I doubt that it could have been achieved in single exposure unless a fairly/very short focal length lens was used, so a stacked image would be required. Looking at your origin I see that you have considerably changed or replaced the background to your still life construction in post processing. I can see a number of artefacts or error in your cutting out of the mug. I would like to see your image minus cat in a square format. Jul 10th
27 Jul 23 Comment I feel that you have gone in a little too close with this image, as of the main flowers all have parts of their petals cut off. The removal of the extra flower on the right was an important improvement to the image. Jul 10th
27 Jul 23 Comment This is an interesting piece of modern art in an urban setting. I don't think that we need the sky, but if included the introduction of the new sky was great improvement.
I like Lauren's version, which helps concentrate attention onto the sculpture, but feel that the background building is too dominant and needs toning down.		 Jul 10th
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