Activity for User 137 - Jon Allanson - joncallanson@gmail.com

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27 Mar 23 Comment You as photographer has got the dogs attention and I love the way he is licking his nose. Your cloning has greatly improve the image and I suggest going a little further and clone out the blades of grass crossing his face. Mar 13th
27 Mar 23 Comment Orchid blooms can be quite a challenge to photograph ,they usually need a large depth of field as there are flowers further back,that if too soft distract. The flowers stand out well against the dark background, and the principal one is slightly over lit. I would be inclined to crop the image half way up and concentrate on the top two flowers. Mar 13th
27 Mar 23 Comment The reversal of the print and the then cropping of the LH side has greatly improved the image and helped to draw attention to the lady in mid-stride. Feel that some selective contrast enhancement applied to the treads of the steps would be of benefit. I also feel that the top half would make a very good square image. Mar 13th
27 Mar 23 Comment I feel that you have cropped in a little too tightly, and should have included all of the base. I agree that the sign would have been better cloned out, even though it is a relatively important part of the story. I fell that a little more of the form of the horse could have been brought out by applying a little more contrast. Mar 13th
27 Mar 23 Comment I love your treatment of this image, you have brought out so much more detail in the petals, and the stamens. In your original image the yellow colour had reduced the contrast and therefor the detail in the centre of the flower. Your conversion has also simplified the background completely reducing any possible distraction there. Mar 13th
27 Mar 23 Comment Images taken along cloisters like this can be very difficult if there is strong directional light rather than the softer light you had here. I feel that your rework is great improvement on your original processing, it has strengthened the effect of the directional lighting, and the increased contrast has made the statues appear sharper, not to mention increasing the texture of the stonework.
Mar 13th
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