Activity for User 137 - Jon Allanson - joncallanson@gmail.com

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27 Mar 22 Comment You have definitely caught the action of the calf and its young rider, which stand out very well against the yellow fence. To me the spectators above the fence asr a major distraction and would be better cropped off. Mar 19th
27 Mar 22 Comment I like your close up approach to the orchid flower. I feel however that your vignette is too strong and I would hove cropped off the out of focus petal in the foreground. Mar 19th
27 Mar 22 Comment A super image, cropping the lady off and removing the distant people was essential, to concentrate attention on the child. The writing on the sign really sets the scene audit makes the kids expression more into -Does that mean me? Mar 19th
27 Mar 22 Comment I like the panoramic format of the image, but feel that it is a shade to dark overall. I am not finding anything to hold me eyesore any length of time, and I feel that lightening the dark triangle on the left would help to concentrate attention on valley leading in from the left. Mar 19th
27 Mar 22 Comment I like the way that you have framed the silo within the large tyre ring. I agree with Jan that the ring on the left is too dominant and I agree that removing part of it so that there is no sky visible between the end of the building and the edge of the frame as the structure of the wheels creates a lead in towards it. I would also be inclined to clone out the weather vane as it is possible distraction. Mar 19th
27 Mar 22 Comment I am a great believer in blending 2 exposures to get a pleasing result as it does not try to over-enhance any of the tones. I like what you have achieved here, everything looks natural and you have created a very gentle vignette to the sky. Mar 19th
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