Activity for User 137 - Jon Allanson - joncallanson@gmail.com

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27 Jul 21 Reply I quite like your crop- it would probably please traditionalists as the ladybug, now sits ob the intersection of the thirds . I would be inclined to remove a bit more of the red petal at the base. Jul 10th
27 Jul 21 Comment To me this would make a stronger monochrome image, as currently the strongest colour is the blue of th sky and this attracts the eye. Jul 10th
27 Jul 21 Comment I like your image of the stove and it cries out to be in mono.
Getting rid of the door - working with a mono layer make a rectangular selection of most of the wall to the left of the chimney. CTR J it onto a new layer then make a selection just inside of your patch, invert the selection and apply content aware fill. This will create whole layer of the wall texture, move the layer down below your main image and paint out to create a layer mask.		 Jul 10th
27 Jul 21 Comment My first impression was that there was major fire raging in the distance with the smoke blowing off to the right, rather than it being a sunrise through mist and cloud. I like the way that you have brought up the detail in the foreground. Jul 10th
27 Jul 21 Comment I like the contrast of the red of the ladybug with the yellow of the bud it is on. To me you have included too much of the plant in the image. I feel that by cropping off the green on the left, and large red petal at the base you would have a much stronger image. Jul 10th
27 Jul 21 Comment You were not helped in this image by the very bright day, which has resulted in an over-bright background and a burnt out shoulder on your model. I quite like your framing of her by the leaves, though I would prefer not to have any crossing the top of her head. I would be inclined to clone out the freckles on her back as once spotted they keep drawing my attention, also the single blue flower on the left is distracting. Jul 10th
27 Jul 21 Comment You have captured the expression on his face very well. Hands are often aproblem in portraits, but here they are part of the story, showing an old man who loved a friendly good time. I find the bit of bright out off focus fence, bottom left very distracting and would be better cloned out. Jul 10th
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