Activity for User 137 - Jon Allanson - joncallanson@gmail.com

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27 Jun 21 Comment This is good example of light painting to enhance the detail in the tree trunk, your exposure has also created a good image of the scene overall. I like your smattering of stars in the sky and because of their relatively small size the small amount of star trail is acceptable. Jun 13th
27 Jun 21 Comment To me this is a simple but very effective image of the tulips. I like their arrangement and the soft yellow and red tones of them. The inclusion of the diffused out of focus flowers in the background presents the tulips appearing against a totally black background. However I would clone out the one touching the flower on the right as once seen it attracts the eye. Jun 13th
27 Jun 21 Comment Congratulations on being a grandma again. You. have really caught a wonderful moment between father and baby, well done. The light area just above the child face concerns me, I cannot decide whether it attracts attention to the child's face, or it is a distraction that needs to be toned down. I would like to see a print of this as I feel the a siren image does not really reveal the tonality involved. Jun 13th
27 Jun 21 Reply I have made both colour and mono prints from this file and I like both, as you say in colour the reds stand out and attract attention. I feel that viewing the mono on screen has reduced the contrast I had on the print in which the strong black and white tones create a degree of punch and help focus attention on the boat on the right. Jun 13th
27 Jun 21 Comment I really like the small range of soft tones in this image, and the diagonal path that the lambs are taking. To make the lambs stand out more I would try either selectively increasing the contrast on them or selectively sharpening them, both of the processes will create a similar result. Jun 13th
27 Jun 21 Comment I am glad we don't get plagues of insects like this here in the UK. well done in having a good depth of field which has made the whole insect and most of the leaves sharp. As often happens with insect wings they pick up a lot of light and create quite a lot of hot spots, I would be inclined to try to tone them down slightly. I would probably try to tone down the very bright green of some of the leaves. Jun 13th
27 Jun 21 Comment To me the the main subject of the image is Milky Way and the hoodoos, the tree is adding little to it - so I would crop to create a square image. The use of the LEDs has brought out all the detail needed in the hoodoos, without spilling over in to their surroundings. In many ways I would prefer the sky to be darker with with less blue in it. Jun 13th
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