Activity for User 137 - Jon Allanson - joncallanson@gmail.com

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27 May 21 Comment I would remove the twig especially as it almost obscuring an eye. I like the way that the colour of the chair almost matches the wing of the bird.
Putting an extra thickness of glass in front of a long lens often softens the focus slightly.
If you used PS I would suggest you try copying the image and applying the Shake Reduction filter to it and then mask and adjust opacity to bring up detail where required.		 May 11th
27 May 21 Comment To me this image depends largely on the patches of sunlight coming between the clouds, where it has hit the bridge it makes it really stand out. I would have like to seen the whole bridge in sunlight, and less sunlight on the surrounding trees. I can appreciate that a drone has a limited flight time and you would have no idea how much longer you would need to wait to get the whole bridge lit up. May 10th
27 May 21 Comment Your image definitely conveys the atmosphere of a spring morning. I think that I would crop off the large tree on the left, as I keep looking from one large tree to the other, and probably removed the vertical strip of sky on the extreme right. May 10th
27 May 21 Comment To me the image is in the top half of the frame, which would concentrate attention on to the fern. The use of IR has made the fern stand out from the trees behind. (fir trees do not reflect a lot of IR. Your use of the 590 filter has meant that much of the image has been recorded by visible light rather than IR. I usually use a 720 filter which only allows a little visible light through. May 10th
27 May 21 Comment I like your view down the canal behind the bike, it really captures the atmosphere of Amsterdam. I think that a different conversion to black and white, which would have lightened the greens of the plants just behind the bike would have made it stand out more. I would also have used some selective sharpening on the bike. May 10th
27 May 21 Comment Looking slightly down emphasises the depth of the bed of tulips, which were nearly all yellow. The red tulip in the fore ground makes a strong centre of attention, though I feel that having it a bit further to the right would create a stronger image. I would be inclined to clone out or re-colour the pink tip in the foreground as it pulls the eye away from the red one. May 10th
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