Activity for User 137 - Jon Allanson - joncallanson@gmail.com

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27 Oct 19 Comment You have caught the wonderful golden tones of the sunset on the cliffs very well, and they make an excellent contrast against the blue of the sea. I would suggest lightening up the bushes in the foreground a little to enhance the way that the back-light is just striking the tops. Oct 16th
27 Oct 19 Comment You have captured a good sense of mood with this image, I really like the way the that the cloth frames her face, and I feel that the closed eyes are an important part of the image. I quite like the slightly soft focus effect that you have, but would have liked to see her eyes and lips a little sharper. Have you tried experimenting with and using selectively the 'shake reduction' feature in the latest versions of PS? Oct 16th
27 Oct 19 Comment We also have 'straw art' here in the UK, the ingenuity of many fathers is quite outstanding. I like your positioning so that the trailer of pumpkins appears to the attached to the tractor. To me the tree behind the tractor needs to be removed. Oct 16th
27 Oct 19 Comment I like your tight cop of the scene, and the rocks create a good lead in the waterfall. To me you have the shutter speed just right, so as to create a blurred effect without removing all texture from the water. I find the large rock on the right top to be a major distraction because of its lightness, I would tone it down or possibly crop it off. Oct 16th
27 Oct 19 Comment Taking shots at events like this is usually quite frustrating as you have to wait to get the face or pose that you want and then something occurs in the background to spoilt it so you have to wait again. By reducing the saturation darkening and slightly blurring the background it helped to remove distractions there. I would have increased the yellow de-saturation as green the bushes on the right are one of the brightest parts of the image and so attract attention. As the lady was side-lit I feel that she would benefit from some lightening up to make her more dominant in the image. Oct 16th
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