Activity for User 137 - Jon Allanson - joncallanson@gmail.com

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27 Oct 18 Comment You have done a good job of removing the distractions from the background. I find the pointy ear looks rather un-natural and once seen keeps drawing the eye, I would suggest cropping some of it off to create a more natural looking ear line. The colour cast is mostly yellow and can be reduced by selectively reducing the yellow saturation. Oct 16th
27 Oct 18 Comment You have placed the moose almost spot on the intersection of he thirds, making it a strong composition. I really like the colours of the foliage immediately behind the moose and the sight of the distant hills. I would be inclined to crop off all the sky as it is the lightest part of the image and so draws the eye to it rather than going to the moose. Oct 16th
27 Oct 18 Comment I actually prefer your original image, as I read across to the 'raft' rather than away from it. I also prefer the slightly darker tones of the original. I feel it would be better as more of a letter box with less sky and sea. Oct 16th
27 Oct 18 Comment I like your very tight cropping of the face. To me it is pity that you have not got eye contact with him in the image. I quite like your mono image but feel that you need to get some stronger tonal variations than those readily available in LIghtroom mono conversion. Oct 16th
27 Oct 18 Comment Your cropping of the sides and the the increase in saturation has helped to concentrate attention on the centre of the flower. I feel that there are 2 green leaves at the top and right that would have been better left at their original saturation level, as they draw the eye. I would also increase the contrast on the stigma to make it a stronger centre of attention. Oct 16th
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