Activity for User 137 - Jon Allanson - joncallanson@gmail.com

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27 Sep 18 Comment To me this is a typical safari shot of the lioness and her cubs. Having been on safaris on several occasions - I have seen that most photographers will work shooting through the roof hatch which gives a high viewpoint rather than the lower down windows - this does make quite a difference in the perspective of the shots particularly if the animals are relatively close to the vehicle. I always prefer to see shots taken from a lower viewpoint rather than looking down onto the subject. Sep 19th
27 Sep 18 Comment Looking at your original I feel that the strong back/side lighting did you no favours. I like your inclusion of a new sky, and the removal of un-required figures in the background. I feel that your use of a texture has reduced the contrast a little too much particularly around her eyes. I like Brad wonder why there is the figurine in the corner. Sep 19th
27 Sep 18 Comment I really like your tonal enhancements to the image, they have definitely made it stand out. looking at your original image I wonder whether it was taken with a very wide lens and the converging/sloping verticals were a result of not having the lens perfectly level. To correct the verticals you would probably have been better to use a perspective correction, distortion that would have stretched the top of the image wider to create a trapezoid shape, rather than trying to use image rotation. Sep 19th
27 Sep 18 Comment Your final image really reflects the complicated process that you used to create it, an excellent image. There are a couple of white lights on the horizon which attract attention from the lighthouse beam and the Milky Way which I feel would be better removed. Sep 19th
27 Sep 18 Comment I like your idea, and feel that removing the foliage from the weir was a definite improvement and I particularly like your reflection in the glass. I feel that your treatment of the distant shoreline has been too strong it is far too blurred so that too much detail is lost and it has a very hard edge against the sky which is out of keeping with the softness applied to the buildings. Sep 19th
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