Activity for User 137 - Jon Allanson - joncallanson@gmail.com

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27 Nov 17 Comment I like the removal of the left arch as in original 2, it gives the left side a good stop to the image. Taking out the lamppost on the right is an improvement, I am not over keen on the triangular part of the lamp remaining, but if removed you need to strengthen the stone structure there as otherwise there is a 'hole' which can be a distraction. Nov 25th
27 Nov 17 Comment I prefer the crop on the second image better than your final one s the man is not cut in half. It taking the image you were immediately ups wth a challenge of having a blue subject against a blue background. I feel that the separation needs to be increased, I would have experimented with a combination of slight darkening and reducing situation in the background. The buglland rider could be selectively sharpened more and the Vibrance increased. The pink shirt and white hat on the man behind the bull I find to particularly distracting. Nov 18th
27 Nov 17 Comment The removal of the cars in the background has made the scene appear less urban, and the lightening of the trees on the right has helped considerably.To me the image lacks a strong centre of interest, had there been some morning or evening warmth in the light on the tree it would have strengthen it considerably. Nov 18th
27 Nov 17 Comment Your cropping has removed all the distracting people from the image very effectively. I like your use of a line drawing technique, I have not heard of that version but Find Edges and Smart Blur can be used in PS. It is often a good idea to remove hard any lines along the edges of buildings. I would crop off the lamppost on the right. Nov 17th
27 Nov 17 Comment A lovely image of the young girl, who is clearly involved in the task in hand of spreading the petals. I like the way she is looking down at the basket. I agree with the others, her face needs lightening slightly. Nov 17th
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