Activity for User 137 - Jon Allanson - joncallanson@gmail.com

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27 Feb 17 Comment Your use of HDR has greatly enhanced the colours and the detail in the image. I can see that the join of the 2 buildings and the left side of the tower are almost vertical, I feel that they should be vertical and that some transformation is needed to right side of the image to bring that back into vertical. Feb 17th
27 Feb 17 Comment A very well constructed image, which gives the impression that was 'taken as seen'.
I like the looking up to the flower head. I would suggest like Brad that the white fringe to theta of the flower is removed.
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27 Feb 17 Comment There is a wonderful expression on the girls face. As you say it was taken under not ideal conditions, which have resulted in a very shallow depth of field. To me this is an excellent image for the family album and to celebrate the arrival of the new born. To use it else where I would be inclined to try cropping off 3/4 of the image just to concentrate on the girl's face. Feb 17th
27 Feb 17 Comment Your treatment has really transformed the image, having brought up all the detail on the ground and in the cacti. Personally I find the sky too dominant and my eye keeps going to the swirl on the right which appears to be rather un-natural to me. i wonder have preferred to see the sky toned down somewhat. I also feel that the back lighting around the cacti could have been enhanced more. Feb 17th

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