Activity for User 1348 - Jane Pittenger - jgpittenger@yahoo.com

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60 Aug 20 Comment I usually use continuous focus but am interested in the 1/2 step back with your photo since the bird seems to be flying in on same plane as the hole as opposed to Bernie's bird Aug 13th
60 Aug 20 Comment I usually use continuous focus but am interested in the 1/2 step back with your photo since the bird seems to be flying in on same plane as the hole as opposed to Bernie's bird Aug 13th
60 Aug 20 Reply You are close...10 miles North of Florence Aug 13th
60 Aug 20 Reply Thanks Lance. I couldn't figure out how to get good exposure on NEOWISE and the dipper while covering the lens too long Aug 12th
60 Aug 20 Comment Thanks Larry Aug 11th
60 Aug 20 Comment I like the title and what a magnificent car. I like your composition. To me the focus seems to be on the number 014 and the rest of the car a bit soft focused. I would have rather the focus be on the grill and lights. I would clone out the bit of car on left edge.. I suspect if they were in motion, you couldn't choose a different vantage point, but if it had been possible, I would have rather had the first motorcycle either totally out of view or separated from the car. I wonder about boosting the yellow saturation so the vintage car is more clearly the star of the show. Aug 10th
60 Aug 20 Reply I'd love to hear your suggestions Aug 10th
60 Aug 20 Comment My favorite number is 3 which probably biases my feelings! I also think even numbers, especially 2 and 4 have a static feel to them while 3 gives me a feeling of movement, of aliveness Aug 10th
60 Aug 20 Reply Are you talking about the gradient filter in LR? Thanks for your idea and showing me what it might look like with your edit Aug 4th
60 Aug 20 Reply Oh, and I like your crop idea Aug 4th
60 Aug 20 Reply Thanks for your thoughtful critique. This was taken significantly after sunset. I covered over my lens as the light moved directly towards the lens hoping for less blow out. I have several other shots but the one I used here had the least overexposure on the lighthouse light. I expect the dynamic range was just too much with the bright lighthouse beams and the dark night sky Aug 4th
60 Aug 20 Reply Thanks Bernie. This was taken on the Oregon Coast and the "sun" is actually a lighthouse light. I do have some other Neowise shots with just the comet and stars but for this one I wanted to include the lighthouse Aug 3rd
60 Aug 20 Reply Thanks Damon. Yes it is Heceta Lighthouse. You are so right about how much brighter that area is. I went back to the raw file and it was that way there...maybe d/t some strange bouncing off the clouds. I went back to the edited image and lightened the right side just a bit using a curves layer and mask. I like how it ended up Aug 3rd
60 Aug 20 Comment I disagree with your friend. I love the ripples, the tonal contrast, the way you have drawn out the clouds and ripples and allowed the mountain to be just a hint. It makes me take a deep breath. I only wish there had been 3 boats or at least that the one second from the right didn't have another boat behind it (or something). I find that distracting. I wonder re cloning out that one boat? Aug 2nd
60 Aug 20 Comment I disagree with your friend. I love the ripples, the tonal contrast, the way you have drawn out the clouds and ripples and allowed the mountain to be just a hint. It makes me take a deep breath. I only wish there had been 3 boats or at least that the one second from the right didn't have another boat behind it (or something). I find that distracting. I wonder re cloning out that one boat? Aug 2nd
60 Aug 20 Comment I love the feet and spread wing and the non distracting background. There is a delightful story told here. I wish the eye were sharper and had a catch light. Hard to do, I know! Aug 2nd
60 Aug 20 Comment I love being taken back to Death Valley through another's eye and the light and shadows and the lines and curves are mesmerizing. The people add a wonderful sense of size. I find myself playing with the crop and considering cropping off some from the left which would 1) echo the triangle shape on the right, 2) add a sense of symmetry (but not quite) which here I find relaxing, and 3) would decrease the intensity of the Aqua by making less of it. To my eye the colors aren't over saturated so much as a tiny bit off. Artistically speaking I think it works but I think the offense of them distracts me from fully enjoying the wonderful shapes and curves and light. Aug 2nd
60 Aug 20 Comment Beautiful colors, grace, Milky Way. I'm guessing this was light painted making the front of tree and roots bright. I always have a hard time getting the amount of light just right. I like the sense of mystery and magic and the roots really add to that. I find the branches in the back being so much darker than the front almost gives a bit of a blurred look which draws my eye right there. But the image as a whole is so glorious that my eyes then travels around the whole frame Aug 2nd

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