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Jim, I think the direction should be part of a story. In this case I can agree to the comment of Henry - good as well. Something new. It is correct, that as non Asian eye will follow left to right. And I want to see the eyes first. If you can. If not, the action may define the direction. For 60% I would prefer right to left.
As I first saw the photo, I was a little bit disappointed. reason was, that I could not see any detail of the birds. No wonder in this situation. More ISO wouldn't help, because the whole picture has only one basic tone and bringing out noise will destroy the view. So the camera can not take so much details in the dark.
With the second view I created a new photo. Show the outlines of the birds. One reason for monochrome conversion. Disadvantage is, that the blue will darken the picture much more than wanted. I think the photo is a good intension, but you can't get more out of it. A little more light intensity would be good.
I've heard about the tool Topaz Sharpen AI but I do not have it in use. The result is really phantastic, but just a little bit oversubscibed. Just for other applications I will keep this possiblity in mind! Thank you for your comment!
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