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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 78 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
Fabulous shot! I love the concept and the image!
If a may be a little bold, I would suggest toning down the sharpening on the books just a little. They appear a little surreal? |
Sep 1st |
| 78 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
Hi Sunil
I will be honest. Loved the baby face, yet when I looked at the photograph, I thought that I was looking at a reflected image of the baby.
To my eye, it appeared that the baby was floating above or disconnected from the box. Once I read your comment, I realised my visual interpretation was incorrect. To my eye, the baby stills appears to be floating above the box. There seems to be a disconnect between the artwork and its background.
Your subject is fascinating. Perhaps you might consider a different background or composite of some kind? e.g baby in a lotus leaf?? |
Sep 1st |
| 78 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
I really like the treatment of this image Brenda. A really nice ice shot!
I would suggest a crop that would ground your model a little more. Meaning, less underneath the model and a few more waves above? You could also add a little more to the left hand side to balance the shot.
You might also consider a little more blacks to accentuate your the model. (matter of taste) She is just that tiny bit 'grey'. |
Sep 1st |
| 78 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
Well Mitch, what can I say but this photograph is awesome!
I like the original, but your crop is awesome!
Apologies, I cannot suggest any improvements. Congratulations!
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Sep 1st |
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