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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 78 |
May 21 |
Comment |
Wow! Lucky you Mitch, this is a beautiful image.
I, like Mitch, prefer the original format as well.
Did you by chance take a shot that includes the top of the petal? |
May 5th |
| 78 |
May 21 |
Comment |
This is a great shot Jason! Lucky, lucky you.
I am the viewer of a beautiful image and am not able to suggest any further improvements. Congratulations! |
May 5th |
| 78 |
May 21 |
Comment |
Love your Mad Hatter Terry!
The expression on his face is a classic!
Suggestions from me?
Have you considered a little more colour and texture in the stones and the door? The colour and patterns in the Hatter's clothes tend to make the background seem a little washed out, despite your previous work.
My other suggestion would be to straighten the lines of the door. The image background appears to lean a tad to the left. (e.g. vertical line of the edge of the door)
Great image though. It makes me smile. |
May 5th |
| 78 |
May 21 |
Comment |
Hi Sunil
Your post is a very challenging photograph to critique.
I am leaning towards the Original 2 as my preference. It has a real street photography feel to it and tells us a story.
I don't mind the bright yellow lights in this image, as there are other yellowy lights in the image that keep the eye roving over the composition in a circular movement, which is what we really want.
If I were to spend any time on an image, I'd choose the Original 2.
Bravo! |
May 5th |
| 78 |
May 21 |
Comment |
Wow, great shot Jim.
I am captivated by those shadows created by the fenceline. They really make the shot work!
I hope that you do not think of me as unhelpful, but I'm at a loss for any other critique or improvement suggestions, apart from my original ... Wow! |
May 5th |
| 78 |
May 21 |
Comment |
Congrats Brenda.
We can see the child's back, the slumped shoulders and hung head ...... all these things tell us a story, right from the first glance.
Photos that make us think and create our own story are gifts for our imagination.
You have already pointed out a few technical issues. I like your crop due to the frame created by the large overhead branch. The goats draw the eye even further into the image.
I have two small things you might like to consider.
Firstly, I would suggest a small rotation to the left so that the line of goats is horizontal.
Secondly, the brown shrubs behind the goats on the left hand side seem a little soft? Perhaps a little judicious sharpening? |
May 5th |
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