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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 14 |
Sep 22 |
Reply |
Hi Greg thank you for that |
Sep 14th |
| 14 |
Sep 22 |
Reply |
Hi Ingrid, thanks for that on reviewing yes it is a bit soft.
In my focus stacking, I probably need to pay attention to the closest part of the subject to get it right. still, it's fun to play with and experiment with. |
Sep 14th |
| 14 |
Sep 22 |
Comment |
Hi Ingrid, a loverly serene image, placing the boats on image right works well, I agree with Greg's suggestion of cropping the sky, alternatively processing aggressively to add contrast and darkness to depict a threatening storm approaching, which would mean you would need to change the title :). |
Sep 14th |
| 14 |
Sep 22 |
Comment |
Hi Kamal, A impressive and menacing cloud formation, together with your perspective gives a true sense of the height the cloud is reaching. I do like the blue toning of the cloud giving a chilled feeling and the separation within the clouds you have achieved gives a sense of depth from the flat feel of the original. You have handled the cockpit window reflection well however there are dirt spots I believe you could clone out removing that distraction element.
Impressive image thanks for sharing |
Sep 6th |
| 14 |
Sep 22 |
Comment |
Hi Xiao, image and editing work extremely well with allowing the viewer to create their own story from the image.
I do like that you have drawn the viewer straight to the models face with the brightness, the background works well and she is separated nicely from that. You handled the hair separation from the background well.
I do believe there is a blue tone on the model's legs, particularly on the left leg on the top as seems as if the wash has been applied over the image may need to be toned down on her skin just a touch. Thanks for sharing |
Sep 4th |
| 14 |
Sep 22 |
Comment |
Hi Greg definitely looks like it would have been a very pleasant way to spend a number of days, peaceful and good cruising weather as well.
As far as the image goes, you may wish to consider a very large vignette just to draw more attention to the central mountain peak. I think that may give it a point of interest to draw in then let the explore after that. Do hope you enjoyed the trip.
thanks for sharing |
Sep 4th |
| 14 |
Sep 22 |
Comment |
Hi Darcy definitely a grungy inner-city scene you have captured, it would have been an exciting outing.
For my eye, there are just too many interesting objects and the eye does not settle. I believe if I was editing I would try to lighten a particular area, as per the attached image, as you have indicated the light poles and wires was the most interesting point. I've done a very simple curve and inserted a reflective gradient to darken both sides of the image and lead the eye down the post and wires.
Technically captured well and does definitely provide many points of interest and scope to play with this image bringing out different areas of interest.
Thanks for sharing |
Sep 4th |
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