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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 96 |
May 21 |
Comment |
Hi Emily
I agree with Gerard. To me the most interesting part of this image is the geometric patterns so I would focus on that by deepening the shadows and enhancing the highlights a bit. I see where Gerard is going with the crop but I am not too fond of the square crop and I don't think the top of the image contributes much. I gave it a go as well to show you what I mean. |
May 10th |
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| 96 |
May 21 |
Comment |
Hi Robert
This is really nice. I love the pattern the sand is making under the water. I see what Dan means regarding Muench! It looks like you got it quite naturally in this image. I like how you made the sand the star of the show and eliminated much of the sky which looks to me like it was kind of boring anyway.
I too will be waiting impatiently to see your 4x5 film.... |
May 10th |
| 96 |
May 21 |
Comment |
This is a very cool image and very creative. I love all the colors that are coming from that rusted metal. It is blue, yellow, brownish-red. I like Roberts idea of trying to get the colors to pop a bit more. Other than that I don't think I would change a thing. The background is lit just right I think. If it were any brighter it would take away from the car.
Great image, Love it. |
May 10th |
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