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60 Jun 21 Comment JANE.

REALLY LIKE WHAT YOU CAPTURED IN THE MOMENT, ADULT AND JUVIE INTERACTING IN THE SURF.
I ALSO LIKE THE FRAMING WITH THE RIPPLES IN THE FOREGROUND, DOES HELP TO FRAME THE PAIR.
GETTING DOWN LOW REALLY HELPS THE VIEWER SEE THEM ON THIER OWN LEVEL.
NICE JOB

I DID DO A LITTLE WORK ON IT BY CROPPING DOWN THE TOP TO REMOVE A LOT OF THE EMPTY SKY, AND A LITTLE OFF THE LEFT TO RETAIN THE POSITION OF THE PAIR.
ALSO TONED DOWN THE WHITE SURF TO BRING OUT MORE DETAILS,
BRINGING UP THE SHADOWS ON THE ADULT CERTAINLY HELPS.

ALL IN ALL GREAT JOB
Jun 5th
60 Jun 21 Comment BERNIE,
NICE JOB ON STREET PHOTOGRAPHY, YOU HAVE CAPTURED THE LONELINESS OF THIS MAN. I LIKE THE NEGATIVE SPACE TO THE RIGHT
YOU'VE GIVEN US ALL THAT THE ROOM YET MY EYE IS ALWAYS DRAWN BACK TO THE MAN. HE'S JUST THAT POWERFUL.
THE SOFT COLORS WORK FOR THE THEME, OF LONELINESS.

THERE ARE PLENTY OF DISTRACTING ITEMS IN THIS IMAGE, BUT AS STREET PHOTOGRAPHY GOES, WHO CARES, YOUR CAPTURING THE EMOTION OF THE SCENE, AND YOU'VE DONE AN EXCELLENT JOB OF DOING JUST THAT.

THANKS
Jun 4th
60 Jun 21 Comment DAMON

ONE OF YOUR BEST YET.

YOU NAILED THE EXPRESSION OF THE RUNNERS CONCENTRATION,AND FOCUS. YES AS STEPHEN MENTIONED A SLOWER SHUTTER SPEED WOULD OF CONVEYED MOTION BUT THE FACE OVER POWER EVEN THAT.

WELL DONE...

AS A SIDE TO NOTE FOR ALL....THIS ISN'T JUST AN IMAGE, ITS A STORY...AND DAMON HAS PRESENTED IT WELL BY HIS DISCRIPTION OF WHAT HE WAS TRYING TO ACCOMPLISH, AND WHY HE WAS DOING IT.
MOST OF US DON'T SAY ANY THING ABOUT OUR IMAGES, OTHER THAT SETTING, REALLY WHAT ARE WE TRYING TO ACCOMPLISH, WHY ARE WE DOING IT, ALONG WITH HOW WE DID IT.

REMEMBER THIS IS A DISCUSSON GROUP, AND THANK YOU DAMON FOR YOUR DISCUSSIONS

Jun 4th

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63 Jun 21 Comment ALANE,

HANDS ARE REALY A TELLING OF A PERSON'S STORY, THERE IS SO MUCH TO LEARN BY THEM, THESE HANDS HAVE BEEN WELL WORKED AND HAVE SEEN MANY A HARD DAY

I LIKE THE PRESENTATION AND THE INTERLOCKING OF THE FINGERS, AS IF HOLDING THIS IMAGE TOGETHER.

HOPE YOU DID WELL IN THE COMPETITION, I KNOW THAT THE DOF HAS BEEN MENTIONED BY THE OTHERS,BUT IT REALLY DOESN'T BOTHER ME THAT MUCH AS IT KEEPS ME STUDYING THE PATERNS AND THE RINGS, EVEN THE NAILS..

I WOULD LIKE TO HAVE SEEN THE LIGHTING MORE EVEN ON EACH HAND, THE HAND ON THE LEFT SEEMS A LITTLE OVEREXPOSED THUS LOSING SOME DETAILS IN THE HAND.

NICE JOB THOUGH
Jun 13th
63 Jun 21 Comment NEAL

DON'T EVER CALL THE "ORKIN MAN"

I JUST LOVE SEEING ALL YOUR LITTLE BUGS, YOU HAVE A GREAT WAY OF RENDERING THEM.

EVERY LITTLE HAIR SHOWS UP SHARP AS A TACK.

I WOULD LOVE TO SEE SOME ON SOMETHING OTHER THAN A SOLID BACKGROUND, MAY BE SOMETHING NATURAL LIKE A LEAF OR FLOWER,OR SOMEHING ELSE.
Jun 13th

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