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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 60 |
May 21 |
Comment |
JOHN,
AS A FLORIDIAN I DON'T GET TO SHOOT MANY SNOW SCENES (REALLY NONE) AS A X-MID-WESTERNER, I DON'T MISS IT THAT MUCH, BUT IT DOES CHALLENGE A PHOTOGRAPHER'S SKILLS TO CAPTURE A PROPERLY EXPOSED IMAGE.
AS THE IMAGE GOES IT INTERESTING TO SEE THE SYMMETRY IN THE OVERALL SCENE, THE BLACK AND WHITE DOES IT JUSTICE. THE SHARPNESS IN THE CENTER PORTION PRETTY DEAD ON, SEEMS TO FALL OFF GOING TO THE RIGHT AND THE LEFT AS IF MAYBE THE FENCE WAS AT A SLIGHT ANGLE TO THE CAMERA.
NO MATTER WHAT THANKS FOR HELPING TO COOL OFF MY HOUSE WITH THIS FROSTY PICTUREÂ |
May 28th |
| 60 |
May 21 |
Comment |
DAMON,
NICE MACRO IMAGE,
I LIKE SOME OF THE COMPOSITION COMPONENTS, S CURVE OF THE PEDAL, SUGGESTION OF THIRD IN THE UPPER RIGHT CORNER.
PERSONAL OPINION, REDUCE THE EXPOSURE I KNOW YOU INCREASEDIT BUT MAYBE TOO MUCH, ONE REASON I SAY THAT IS THAT MY EYE GOES TO THE WHITE AND THE BRIGHT, WHICH IS YOUR NEGATIVE SPACE, THUS TAKING MY EYE OFF THE SUBJECT, (THE SPIDER).
YOUR FOCUS SEEMS TO TRAIL OFF AT THE BACK OF THE SPIDER, AND THERE IS PLENTY OF SHARPNESS IN FRONT OF HIM ON THE PEDAL, MAYBE WAITING ON THE LITTLE GUY TO WALK INTO THAT SPACE. I KNOW THAT ITS TUFF TO GET NATURE TO COOPERATE. |
May 28th |
| 60 |
May 21 |
Comment |
BERNIE,
THANKS FOR YOUR IMAGE THIS MONTH,
I BELIEVE DAMON PRETTY MUCH TOUCHED EVERY POINT THERE IS TO TOUCH.
IT IS IMPORTANT THAT YOU TRY TO GET THAT SEPERATION OF SUBJECT AND BACKGROUND, THE BACKGROUND CAN OVER DOMINATE THE SUBJECT IN MOST CASES.
(ALTHOUGH IF YOUR BACKGROUND WAS BLURRED I WOULDN'T HAVE NOTICED YOUR LIZARD ON THE TREE)
SOMETIMES A LIGHT VINETTE HELPS PULL THE EYE INTO YOUR SUBJECT, IF YOU BACKGROUND IS SOME WHAT DISTRACTING.
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK |
May 28th |
3 comments - 0 replies for Group 60
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| 63 |
May 21 |
Comment |
NEAL,
ANOTHER INTERESTING BUG I HAVEN'T SEEN FOR A LONG TIME, THEY WERE ALWAYS A PAIN IN MY *** (GARDEN).
AS THE OTHERS HAVE ALREADY MENTIONED GREAT JOB ON STACKING.
THE STROKE IS A GOOD THING HERE, AS IT SEPERATES THE IMAGE FROM THE SCREEN BACKGROUND.
THE LIGHTING IS WARM, GIVEING IT A VERY MOODY FEEL.
ONE THING I DO NOTICE IS THE EARWICK IS VERY CLOSE TO THE TOP OF THE IMAGE MAYBE A LITTLE MORE SPACE A TOP WOULD HEL[P TO GIVE IT MORE BALANCE.
BEING ON JUST THE BLACE BACKGROUND MAKES IT LOOK VERY SCIENTIFIC, MAY BE ON NATURAL BACKGROUND COULD HELP IT SEEM MORE ALIVE.
VERY SHARP AND NO LOSS OF DETAILS AS I REMEMBER THEM
THANKS
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May 31st |
| 63 |
May 21 |
Comment |
GARY,
THE ONLY THING I KNOW FOR SURE IS THIS DOESN'T FIT INTO MY CONCEPT OF PHOTOGRAPHY,
THAT SAID THE COLORS DO WORK TOGETHER WELL, RED AND BLUES(SHADES OF) ALWAY GET THE ATTENTION OF THE VIEWER'S EYE
UNFORTUANTLY MY EYE GOES TO ALL THE NEGATIVE SPACE TRYING TO FIND SOMETHING ELSE TO SEE, AS THE PEDAL DOESN'T DO ANYTHING FOR ME, THE MOSQUITO IS INTERESTING JUST BEING THERE SEEMLY FLOATING IN SPACE,(OVERALL IT MAKES ME THINK OF A SPACE CRAFT).
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May 31st |
2 comments - 0 replies for Group 63
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5 comments - 0 replies Total
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