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Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 63 |
Apr 21 |
Comment |
BARBARA,
A PIN OAK LEAF, NICE TO SEE AGAIN.
NOTICED IT WAS A CLOUDY DAY THUS THE MUTED LIGHT..
NICE DIAGONIAL LINES OF THE DECK..FLOWOING WITH THE STEM OF THE LEAF..INTERESTING PIECE WITHTHE PINE NEEDLE CUTTING ACROSS THE LINES OF THE DECK, ADDING A LITTLE DIFFERENT DIMENSION.
PERHAPS NOT SHOOTING STRAIGHT DOWN COULD ADD MORE DETAILS TO THE VIEWS ON THE LEAF. ONLY OTHER THING IS LEAF IS VERY CLOSE TO BOTTOM EDGE, MAYBE, IN MY OPINION A LITTLE MORE ROOM THERE. |
Apr 1st |
| 63 |
Apr 21 |
Comment |
PRISCILLA,
VERY SOFT AND MOODY IMAGE.
EXCELLENT FOCUS THROUHOUT THE PEDALS, STEM IS NICE AND SOFT NOT DISTRACTING..NICE OFFSET TO THE LEFT OF THE FRAME..I LIKE THAT YOU USED BACKGROUND PAPER INSTEAD OF MAIPULATION...( I CARRY MANY DIFFERENT COLORED CLOTHS IN MY CAMERA BAG AT ALL TIME TO USE FOR THIS PURPOSE.)
WITH ALL THAT SAID I THINK TONING DOWN THE BACKGROUND JUST A LITTLE MAKES THE IMAGE POP A LITTLE MORE..
REALLY NICE PRESENTATION..
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Apr 1st |
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| 63 |
Apr 21 |
Comment |
MURPHY,
I'M GLAD YOU CHOOSE TO TAKE THIS WALK AND SHARE WITH US THIS PLANT, AS I HAVE NEVER SEEN ONE, AND I HAVE SPENT YEARS HIKING IN THE HIGH SIERRA'S OF CALIF.
I LIKE THAT THE YELLOW FLOWERS EXPLODE OUT OF THE TOP OF THE RED BASE PLANT, REMINDS ME OF A FIREWORK GOING OFF.
AS THE COMPOSITION GOES, I LIKE THAT YOU HAVE THE LEADING LINE OF THE SUCCLENTS GOING FROM LOWER LEFT UP TOWARDS THE CLUSTER OF FLOWERS ON THE UPPER RIGHT. IT HELPS TO CARRY MY EYE ALLTHE WAY ACROSS THE IMAGE,
THE CONTRAST BETWEEN THE YELLOWS, REDS, AND GREENS, AGAINST THE GREY GRANITE REALLY MAKE THIS PLANT STAND OUT EVEN MORE.
EVERY THING IS IN GOOD FOCUS, WITH JUST A LITTLE FALLING OFF ACROSS THE TOP WHICH HELPS HOLD ME IN THE IMAGE.
THNAKS AGAIN FOR SHARING THIS WITH US |
Apr 1st |
| 63 |
Apr 21 |
Comment |
GARY
AGAIN WELCOME TO THE GROUP.
THIS IMAGE IS A NICE WAY TO INTRODUCE YOURSELF..
I'VE MENTIONED IT BEFORE I'M NOT A BIG FAN OF HEAVY MANIPULATION, AND WHAT WOULD BE CALLED FINE ART PHOTOGRAPHY..I'VE SEEN MANY PEOPLE USE IT BADLY, JUST TO COVER UP A BAD IMAGE.
NOW THAT I HAVE EXPLAINED MY BIAS'S LET SAY THIS....
WOW!!!
I REALLY DON'T KNOW IF EVERYTHING I'M LOOKING AT IS REALL,,,BUT THIS IMAGE OF FLOWER AND BEE IS VERY WELL COMPOSED, I LOVE THAT THE FLOWER IS IN THE BOTTOM THIRD OF THE FRAME WITH ROOM FOR THE BROWN STEM TO PROJECT UPWARDS ..THE LIGHTING ON THE FLOWER IS JUST RIGHT AS I CAN SEE LOTS OF DETAILS IN THE PEDALS...EVEN THE POSITION OF THE BEE ONB THE FLOWER IS NICE...AT FIRST I THOUGHT THE VIGNETTE A BIT STRONG, BUT IT HELPS TO FOCUS ME INTO THE FLOWER(MANY MAY LIKE STROKES, BUT I LIKE WHAT YOU HAVE ACCOMPLISHED HERE)MAKING THE IMAGE BLEND INTO ITS SURROUNDINGS.
NICE JOB AND THANKS FOR SHARING
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Apr 1st |
| 63 |
Apr 21 |
Comment |
NEAL
REALLY NICE MACRO ...
THAK YOUR WIFE FOR NOT TERMINATING (SMASHING) IT, THUS GIVING US A CHANCE TO SEE WHAT YOU COULD DO WITH IT....
COLORS ARE GREAT..DETAILS EXCELLENT...COMP SUPREME ... AND I LIKE THE STROKE...good color choice...
NIT PICKING...THE OUT OF FOCUS BACKGROUND, IS VERY DIFFCULT TO CLEAN UP, BUT A LITTLE BIT I THINK HELPS.
STILL OVERALL GREAAAT SHOT
THANKS
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Apr 1st |
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