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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 60 |
Nov 20 |
Reply |
thanks for the commments...as far as the forehead question...its not a studio shot, this is street work and sometimes you take what you can and then hope for the best.
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Nov 15th |
| 60 |
Nov 20 |
Reply |
thanks,,,,the hair was just to soft with the dof I used |
Nov 15th |
| 60 |
Nov 20 |
Comment |
Dianne
AS I LOOK AT THIS IMAGE, I SEE YOU USED, MAYBE EARLY MORNING LIGHT, WHICH WAS GOOD(USUALLY LATE DAY YOU GET MORE HAZE THERE FROM THE HEAT), BUT WHATEVER, YOU DID GET THE SUNLIGHT DOWN LOW.
ONE DOESN'T KNOW WHAT YOUR POSITION WAS OR IF YOU COULD CHANGE YOU ANGLE, HAD YOU BEEN ABLE TO MOVE TO THE RIGHT,PERHAPS GETTING THE PINE TREE AND THE NATURAL ARCH, AND LESS OF THE BRIGHT BACKGROUND ON THE RIGHT MAY HAVE BEEN A BETTER COMPOSITION.
BUT THEN WE'RE NEVER IN THE PHOTOGRAHER'S SHOES.
NICE TO SEE BRYCE CANYON AGAIN
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Nov 13th |
| 60 |
Nov 20 |
Comment |
JANE,
WIHS I COULD GET OUT TO THAT AREA, I'VE SEEN SOME REALLY NICE SHOTS FROM THAT AREA, BUT I DON'T THMK I'VE SEEN IT DONE IN B/WSO LET ME COMPLIEMENT YOU ON GOING THAT WAY.
THE CLOUDS IN THIS ARE WHAT REALLY SETS THIS OFF, THE LIGHTING ON THE TREES ALSO BRINGS YOUR EYE TO THE CENTER OF YOUR IMAGE AND THEN I KEEP TAKING IN OTHER PARTS.
I WILL AGREE WITH DAMON THAT SOME AREAS ARE BRIGHT AND CATHES MY EYE. THE CLOUDS TO THE UPPER RIGHT AND THE GROUND IS A LITTLE BRIGHT LIKE IT WAS FROSTY.
I PLAYED WITH JUST THOSE TWO ASPECTS, NOT TO TAKE AWAY FROM YOUR FEEL FOR THE SCENE, JUST MY HUMBLE OPINION.
STILL WAY TO GO FOR IT |
Nov 6th |
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| 60 |
Nov 20 |
Comment |
DAMON,
I HOPE YOU BOUGHT THAT DOGGY A SHOT, LOOKS LIKE HE COULD USE ONE.
GOOD EXPOSURE, GOOD FRAMEWORK AROUND THE DOGS HEAD LOL..
BUT HE DOSEN'T LOOK LIKE HE'S TOO HAPPY ABOUT IT.
IF I WERE TO DO ANYTHING TO THIS IMAGE,IT WOULD BE TO CROP IN ON THE LEFT ABOUT AN INCH OR INCH AND A HALF, MAKING THE COLLAR MORE EVENLY SPACED IN THE CENTER OF THE FRAME THUS PLACING THE HAPPY FACE OFF TO THE LEFT A LITTLE.
BUT OTHERWISE NICE COMEDY SHOT |
Nov 6th |
| 60 |
Nov 20 |
Comment |
BERNIE,
NICE TO SEE PEOPLE OUT AT MY TIME OF THE DAY!
NICE COLOR IN THE SKY NICE ACTION IN THE SURF.
YOUR HORIZON WAS OUT OF LEVEL SLIGHTLY,I STRAIGHTENED IT A BIT AND ADDED A DIFERENT CROP, REDUCING THE SKY WHICH HELPS PUT THE HORIZON OUT OF THE CENTER, AND ADDED A LITTLE PUNCH IN THE SKY, HIGHLIGHTING THE CLOUDS A LITTLE, OPENED UP THE SHADOWS IN THE WAVES, GIVES IT A LITTLE BOOST.
I HAVEN'T USED ELEMENTS IN MANY YEARS SO I DON'T KNOW WHAT THE OFFER NOW, BUT AS DAMON SAID LIGHTROOM IS AWESOME AND VERY EASY TO USE.
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Nov 6th |
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| 60 |
Nov 20 |
Comment |
EMMY,
I AGREE WITH DAMON ON THE SHUTTER SPEED, THE F STOP CHOICE, I LOVE THE FALL COLORS, MYSELF I LOVE WORKING WITH LONG SHUTTER SPEEDS, AND YOU USED JUST THE RIGHT AMOUNT TO SMOOTH OUT THE WATER YET SHOW THE SPEED OF THE WATER.
I DID TAKE ON MYSELF TO DO A LITTLE CROPPING, I BELIVE IT HELPS BRING THE VIEWERS EYE TO THE WATERFALL, THATS THE MAIN SUBJECT.
I DID TONE DOWN THE WATERFALL AND THE LEAVES SOME, WHICH I THINK HELPS DRAW THE FOCUS TO THE FALLS.
AND THE ND64 IS 6 STOPS OF LIGHT AND THEN A 1000 IS 10 STOPS....I USE THE LEE FILTER SYSTEM WHERE I CAN STACK A FULL 10 OR 6 STOP AND SOMETIMES USE A GRAD TO TAKE DOWN SOME SPECIAL AREAS THAT ARE EXTRA BRIGHT. AFTER A WHILE THEY BECOME THE FIRST THING I PULLOUT ON ALL MY LANDSCAPES DAY AND NIGHT
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Nov 6th |
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5 comments - 2 replies for Group 60
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| 63 |
Nov 20 |
Reply |
no matter what your work is always good and i like what you do..by the way just got my R5 this week and it has focus stacking in camera that i look forward to work with.. |
Nov 26th |
| 63 |
Nov 20 |
Comment |
PRISCILLA,
FIRST OFF I REALLY LIKE WHAT YOU ARE DOING HERE!
SHOOTING UP THE FLOWER,
MOST PEOPLE NEVER LOOK AT A FLOWER FROM UNDER IT, SO THIS WILL ALWAYS GET ONES ATTENTION AS SOMETHING THEY'RE NOT USE TO SEEING.
THE BACKLIGHT DOES WONDERS FOR YOUR SUBJECT. THE BLURED BACKGROUND IS PERFECT.
THE WHITE FLOWER AT THE BOTTOM HAS GREAT EXPOSURE FOR THE WHITES AND IS SHARP, WITH LOTS OF DETAIL.
NOW IF I TOOK THE LITTLE FLOWER OUT, I HAVE A NICE LINE LEADING TO WHAT I LIKE AS THE SUBJECT (THAT LITTLE GREEN LEAF), WITH THOSE LITTLE VEINS RUNNING THOUGH IT, IF THAT WAS SHARPER ITS A WALL HANGER.
NICELY DONE ANYWAY ,,I STILL LIKE AS IT IS, ( I'M JUST SAYING) |
Nov 25th |
| 63 |
Nov 20 |
Comment |
BARBARA,
EVERYONES COMMENTS ARE RIGHT ON..COLORS WORK TOGETHER WELL.
COMPOSITION IS GOOD, THE STEM MAKING A DIAGONIAL LINE ADDS TO YOUR COMPOSTION, ADDING A BACKGROUN DOES REQUIRE CONSIDERABLE WORK, SO I SALUTE YOU FOR THAT, ITS NOT MY CUP OF TEA BUT IT WORKS WELL, NOT REALLY OVERDONE AS I HAVE SEEN MANY TIMES.
SUGESTION, WHILE DOING THAT IN POST HOW ABOUT LOOKING FOR THOSE LITTLE THINGS TO CLEAN UP, LIKE THE BLACK DIRT ON THE PETALS.
AND MAYBE TURN THE FLOWER SO WE COULD SEE MORE OF THE HEART OF THE PETALS.
BUT AS USUAL YOU DO NICE WORK!!
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Nov 25th |
| 63 |
Nov 20 |
Comment |
MURPHY,
I LIKE MUSHROOMS IN THE WILD,,SO YOU GET HIGHER SCORE WITH ME..
THE COLORS DO WORK WELL AS BROUGHT OUT BY THE OTHERS.
AS FAR AS THE CLUSTER I THIMK THEY WORK JUST AS IT IS, THEY CREATE A LEADING DIAGONIAL LINE FROM THE LEFT TO THE RIGHT LEADING UP TO THE LARGER CLUSTER SEPERATING OR REMOVING OTHER SHROOMS WOULD TAKE AWAY FROM THAT LINE.
THE USE OF A REFLECTOR IS A GREAT TOOL, I KEEP A SMALL FOUR WAY IN MY VEST POCKET AT ALL TIMES.
THEY LOOK GOOD ENOUGH EAT!!
SIDE NOTE I DON'T THINK THOSE ARE EDIBLE (MAYBE IF YOUR A HIPPY TYPE, BUT WOULDN'T ADVISE TRYING THEM). |
Nov 25th |
| 63 |
Nov 20 |
Comment |
LOU,
I THINK THE PREVIOUS COMMENTS ARE ENOUGH SAID.
WHAT COULD BE DONE TO IMPROVE??
I KNOW THE EQUIPMENT YOUR USING IS EXCELLENT, MY FRIEND USES THE SAME COMBO..
INSTEAD OF CROPING IN POST NOW ABOUT SHOOTIN THIS AT 70MM THAT WOULD HELP YOU IN NOT CROPING SO MUCH AS MENTIONED THAT CREATES NOISE.
AND AS A MENTOR OF MINE REMINDS ME ALL THE TIME OUR EYE GOES TO WHITE AND BRIGHT THUS I DON'T REALLY SEE THE BETTLES, SO LESS WHITE AND TONED DOWN WOULD GREDATLY HELP..AND OF COURSE SPEED COUNTS!
KEEP IT UP |
Nov 25th |
| 63 |
Nov 20 |
Comment |
NEAL,
ANOTHER SCI-FI STAR.
THE COLORS ARE POWERFUL.
RIGHT IN YOUR FACE STARE.
THE ANTENAS TO RHE EYE VERY SHARP, EVER LITTLE HAIR ON THE FACEAND LEGS SHARP.
ONE QUESTION WHY THE HALO AROUND THE HAIR ON THE EDGES?
SEEM A LITTLE DISTRACTING. |
Nov 25th |
5 comments - 1 reply for Group 63
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10 comments - 3 replies Total
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