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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 91 |
Aug 20 |
Reply |
Art and Lisa
Thanks for the feedback and edits."reversed engineer" both to better appreciate your work. Gary |
Aug 27th |
| 91 |
Aug 20 |
Comment |
In my view, I think the wood beams etc take away from the image and title. Together with the column and building do little in helping to frame the subject which I see as the bell tower and stormy clouds. Were it my image I would be regretting not having stepped closer, like beside the column, and taking another shot. |
Aug 11th |
| 91 |
Aug 20 |
Comment |
I agree with Rick's comment about the distraction of the black spot. I see it as boat of some sort so that helps me figure out what is horizon, water and beach(I guess). I would like to have seen more definition in the flowers as they seem washed out as well as definition in the beach. Do like the silhouette of grass. |
Aug 11th |
| 91 |
Aug 20 |
Comment |
I choose to crop your image. I felt there was excess building on the right as well as clouds and I still have the feeling of Ship Street. See my attached file. Once noticed I am drawn to what I believe is the roof of the church. A cloud seems to be coming over the roof line and casting a shadow on the roof. Otherwise I would assume these to be very high clouds. |
Aug 11th |
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| 91 |
Aug 20 |
Comment |
Instantly, I see this as fireworks in the night sky. My only recommendation is to add the fire trail from the launching mortar. Nice work! |
Aug 11th |
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