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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 91 |
Jul 20 |
Comment |
A great tranquil image. Would not make changes. Good detail, texture and tones. |
Jul 14th |
| 91 |
Jul 20 |
Comment |
I like the leading lines with the red trees at the end. The gold line, probably yellow in real life, is an added bonus. As a suggestion, one might want to do some clean up on the image--dirt and spots on the platform as well as removing the poles center right. Nice sharp focus throughout the image. |
Jul 14th |
| 91 |
Jul 20 |
Reply |
Judy, from your cropping, it now appears the post is tapered on the right but not left, In the original they appear square and parallel both left and right to the background. Furthermore, the red left and right act, in my view as blocks to keeping my eye in the image. |
Jul 14th |
| 91 |
Jul 20 |
Comment |
I concur with the comments from Judy and Lisa. I do find the truck and items on the truck bed rather flat, lacking in tone and texture variations. Perhaps using the LR adjustment brush
would aid in changes using different setting on different parts |
Jul 14th |
| 91 |
Jul 20 |
Comment |
I like your image and the treatment you have given the original. The road and limbs moves me to the right where the more red tree keeps me in the image. There is a square feature just left of center in the front most limbs. Might want to take it out. Good job!! |
Jul 14th |
| 91 |
Jul 20 |
Reply |
Judy, I have mixed reactions to darkening the white building on the right. I think it helps stopping the eye as one moves from left to right and keeping the viewer in the image. Time to get out the decision coin. Sharpening the the sky is an improvement. The "river" is the San Francisco Bay. Just to the left of the scene is the Western span of the Bay bridge. |
Jul 14th |
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