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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 87 |
Apr 23 |
Comment |
Congratulations on trying something new. I am a firm believer in learning something new as often as possible. Your resulting image does, however, have me a bit confused. This may be because I have no knowledge of what the course was designed to teach. Perhaps your image is a correct interpretation of what this project asked you to do. Regardless of my acknowledged lack of information about the course, let me make a few observations.
First of all, this is not what I understand to be a multiple exposure, but a composite of two separate images. Second, the offset of the two images produce three different color renditions resulting in the appearance of three different panels. This is probably due to two different color casts as can be most noticeable in the color of the sand. There must be a better way to blend the images. Third, my mind does not go to a story of blending old and new, but rather to a fear that the future is coming so quickly as to erase the past. |
Apr 6th |
| 87 |
Apr 23 |
Comment |
Can't nature photography be frustrating? Those little creatures just don't seem to understand how to select a proper place in which to position themselves. In this case, as has already mentioned, he/she selected a place with too many distractions. Otherwise, I feel you have done a good job in presenting what you were given.
Do you know what the three "P"s are? 1.Patience 2. Patience 3. Patience |
Apr 6th |
| 87 |
Apr 23 |
Comment |
Will, very nice image. Sometimes we get lucky and the unexpected happens. I am not disturbed by the boat or the leaning cabin. The leaning can be fixed in Photoshop. I find the bright cloud coming in from the left to be more distracting. I would suggest a crop just to the right of the house with the lights on. Your center of attention is then the cloud and sky lit by the lightning strike. |
Apr 6th |
| 87 |
Apr 23 |
Comment |
Dale, I like it! While I have worked with finding art in everyday items around the house, you have succeeded in turning the lowly sparrow into a star. Great background. Well done. |
Apr 6th |
| 87 |
Apr 23 |
Comment |
As one who has not tried photographing birds in flight, I find it hard to comment. I will, however, make a few comments. No, don't replace the sky. The bird is now seen without distractions of clouds. Did you set your shutter to a burst speed, or single shot? I wish the wing closest to the camera was shaped more pleasingly in the image. Is the image slightly overexposed? I don't see texture in the whitest part of the body under the wing.
My lack of experience in this kind of photography may have led me astray. If so, I offer my apology.
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Apr 6th |
| 87 |
Apr 23 |
Reply |
Thank you. |
Apr 6th |
| 87 |
Apr 23 |
Reply |
Thank you for your honesty. This is how we learn from each other. The story, if there is one, is very subtle and mostly left to the imagination of the viewer. |
Apr 6th |
| 87 |
Apr 23 |
Reply |
Thank you for your critique. I value your opinion and suggestions. |
Apr 6th |
| 87 |
Apr 23 |
Reply |
Thank you. To me, the boats at the dock present a restful scene of a day's activity coming to an end. |
Apr 6th |
| 87 |
Apr 23 |
Comment |
Lance, I don't really care what the statue is. It is the shadow that is the subject. The image can stand on its own strength, but I can imagine it as part of a larger exhibit of your work. |
Apr 6th |
| 87 |
Apr 23 |
Reply |
Thank you Cindy. |
Apr 3rd |
6 comments - 5 replies for Group 87
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6 comments - 5 replies Total
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