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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 8 |
May 24 |
Comment |
I have a friend who lives by the seashore and delights in shooting waves almost every day. Their ever-changing forms make interesting abstracts, as here. It is in that spirit that I take this image, as it isn't exactly clear to me what you were aiming to create or what the experiment with color was about. As in Alastair's image, there is almost complete absence of scale here, allowing the viewers to create their own story. |
May 20th |
| 8 |
May 24 |
Comment |
A colorful image, with some interesting shapes. But I wish we could see more of the kid than just the back of his head. |
May 20th |
| 8 |
May 24 |
Comment |
The dog staring from behind the picket fence, although an unusual composition, works for me. But I find the door handle a major distraction, and would suggest cropping to just above the dog's head. The figurine at left seems to be looking up at the dog! |
May 20th |
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| 8 |
May 24 |
Comment |
Yes, selective focus could improve the impact. I'm bothered by the truncated person at left and the vestigial arm at right. Not sure why you didn't consider a tighter crop. The lack of tonal separation between the figures also detracts. |
May 20th |
| 8 |
May 24 |
Comment |
Interesting geometric abstract, with almost complete absence of scale. Could do with a light border or frame. |
May 20th |
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