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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 8 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
Great macro. I like the strong color palette. A crop of the top half of the image (just above the green stem) would concentrate the viewer's attention on just the flower (and would be a different - horizontal - image), but I like the texture (furry hairs) on the stalk of the flower in your image as shot. I've not used the Sweet Optic; thanks for showing a sample of what it can do. |
Jun 26th |
| 8 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
What wondrous architecture! What glorious light! BRAVO!!! |
Jun 26th |
| 8 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
I like your original image (except for the moon - see below). I think the traffic lights are necessary to add context to the cars at the bottom of the image, which otherwise stands out as a jarring note in the edited images. The traffic lights also provide some "broken symmetry" to relieve the tension of the repetitive wavy lines. As for the moon, I cannot put my finger on it, but something between its texture and that of the background sky seems out of place to me. What time did you shoot the main image? I would guess it was in full daylight, whereas the moon seems to be a twilight image. |
Jun 26th |
| 8 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
Wonderful clean sweeping curves. Subtle variation in tonal value within a limited tonal range. Hint of texture in the masonry. Neat composition; I like it! |
Jun 26th |
| 8 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
A window in space, a slice in time! I could do without the loud yellow foreground - distracts and clashes with the tones in the rest of the image. |
Jun 26th |
| 8 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
You have definitely transformed the mood of the image, while retaining and even emphasizing the feeling of intense concentration. But I'm not sure if the flour dust on the background enhances the image. |
Jun 26th |
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