Activity for User 1238 - Martin Newland - martinnewland@tpg.com.au

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2 Feb 20 Comment This is a lovely image. If you have the RAW image maybe you could try and extract some detail from the foreground and brighten it up. It is very dark and sombre down there, with little or no detail in the groom's coat and hair and the bride's hair.

I have had a quick go at brightening it up, but I am sure it would be a better result if the RAW file was used.		 Feb 10th
2 Feb 20 Comment It is a very busy image, and like Shirley, I'm not sure where my eye should rest. I know it is great to have 20/20 hindsight, but I wonder what the composition might have been if you had taken the image from alongside the pot plant and railing, hence cutting out the boat and rigging in the foreground. Feb 6th
2 Feb 20 Comment Beautiful treatment of this image Shirley, and I love the cropped version. There is now a nice balance between the foliage and the barns. Feb 6th
2 Feb 20 Comment This is a great image and, looking at the original, there are so many things you can do with it. Without the title, I may not have realized what was happening in this scene.

Maybe include the whole of the cut-throat razor and brighten/lighten it. I have tried a square crop and cloned in the shaving brush and stand to add to the story. Even darken and de-saturate the background a little so that the two protagonists "pop" a little.

Either way, it is a great street photo and can be treated in so many different ways.		 Feb 4th
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40 Feb 20 Comment Lovely image Julie. I like the sepia and I like the reflection in the water. Maybe you could change the cropping to a 2:1 aspect ration. I realise this eliminates most of the reflection, but it probably draws more attention to the paddle boat. Just some thoughts. Great image Feb 12th
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