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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 60 |
May 20 |
Comment |
I love the bird! Very well in focus. Could you change your shooting angle a bit to move the out of focus green off the bird?
I think the image would benefit by cropping the top & right, and just a bit of the bottom. |
May 21st |
| 60 |
May 20 |
Comment |
I, too love the bud. Something vertical like this is very hard to make a good composition. More of the tree in the background? Less? Closer in? I would like to see more of the bud in focus. At any event, the white in the branch needs to be toned down. |
May 21st |
| 60 |
May 20 |
Comment |
I love the subject -- wonderful rhythm & flow. I like the stick as is -- it allows the circle of the plant to come around more. If it were possibble to increase the canvas & put the stick at the very top verticle it might work better.
What I don't like is the checkered background. Is it the screen? Could you take out the screen? |
May 21st |
| 60 |
May 20 |
Comment |
I love the lighting. You have captured the spirit of the tulip very well. However, it's back focused; the I think the leading edge of the tulip should be in focus. As is, the green and middle of the tulip is in focus. Again, I like the somewhat pale color of the tulip; you might consider toning down the greens. |
May 21st |
| 60 |
May 20 |
Reply |
No matter how many slices I have (actually, never as many as 70), there are still soft areas around curves. It's not the lighting. I always use natural light for my botanicals this year. (For my leaves, I only use artificial light.) The music room has 2 sources of light -- a group of 5-6 windows & around the corner, 2 windows. So, most of light almost always comes from the left. I am lucky to have the tall rectangular windows. There is no softness in your image I find disturbing. |
May 21st |
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