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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 4 |
Dec 25 |
Comment |
Having been there with you and Issac, I find it interesting how you have interpreted this scene. Although we didn't have the best weather in all locations, we came back with a lot of great memories. The patterns in the sand is the center of interest in this scene. Overall it turned out very nicely. |
Dec 28th |
| 4 |
Dec 25 |
Comment |
A very nice image. I noticed that you were able to avoid any edge mergers. That was perhaps the first thing I saw. The diagonal angle really makes this image. I give's a sense of movement. Your exposure is well done where you have captured detail in the sky and the interior of the building. Those yellow balls gives it the added pop. |
Dec 28th |
| 4 |
Dec 25 |
Comment |
Hi Guy, I sat and studied this image for a few minutes before commenting. It took a while to see to see the "monster." I would offer these suggestions. First off, I think your image should be cropped at the top. That area is not adding to the scene. I would also suggest adding a heavy vignette to darken the edges and draw the viewer's attention to the monster. |
Dec 28th |
| 4 |
Dec 25 |
Comment |
Normally I would object to a line going through the middle of a photograph but in this situation it works perfectly. The exposure and color balance are well done. |
Dec 28th |
| 4 |
Dec 25 |
Comment |
Nice work Gary. It proves Ansel Adams expression, You don't take a photograph, you make it." The sweeping curves add motion to the image and the added moon fills that upper right corner nicely. The overall exposure and color is spot on.
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Dec 28th |
5 comments - 0 replies for Group 4
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| 44 |
Dec 25 |
Comment |
I really like how you placed the subject within the frame. The overall color scheme really suits the subject perfectly well. |
Dec 28th |
| 44 |
Dec 25 |
Comment |
I too have an OM1 MKII and have found some bugs. I have been impressed with how well it performs but sometimes this old brain longs for the day of manual photography. Your Photoshop skills saved this image. It has a good overall range. I commend you for taking this photo. I may have kept driving. |
Dec 28th |
2 comments - 0 replies for Group 44
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| 86 |
Dec 25 |
Reply |
Thank you. I have been debating on whether or not to crop the top of the image. I appreciate your feedback. |
Dec 28th |
| 86 |
Dec 25 |
Comment |
Amazing detail for having been shot through a bus window. It has good color and sharpness too. My only concern is the composition. I would like to see some of the right side cropped out |
Dec 28th |
| 86 |
Dec 25 |
Comment |
Interesting image. I too like the idea of correcting the perspective. My only concern is that the car is tightly placed in the lower right corner. I played around with Snapseed expand and added some to the right side. (I'm sure Photoshop could do a better job. Some added pavement below the car would help somewhat. Using Snapseed I tried the Vintage look and it adds some nice effects. |
Dec 28th |
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| 86 |
Dec 25 |
Comment |
The color of this purple aster has been well rendered. Did you know that you smart phone can identify unknown plants?
I like the slight angle of the stem of the flower. I made two modifications. Added a vignette in Lightroom Mobile to darken the edges and make the flower pop. Also, using Lightroom Mobile masking, I selected the flower and added some contrast. Some added sharpening helped too. |
Dec 28th |
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| 86 |
Dec 25 |
Comment |
I'm sure this image had some emotional meaning of your trip. Sometimes we need to help nature with some post processing. I opened your image in Lightroom Mobile and played around with some presets and the Auto settings. There's a hidden feature called "Enhance". It analyzes the image and selects the sky, water, vegetation and foreground. By just playing around I added some pop to the image and I also cropped some of the trees in the foreground. It may not suit your style, but it does show the ability of the software. |
Dec 28th |
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| 86 |
Dec 25 |
Comment |
You did well. I have tried this with my big boy camera and haven't had much success. I would like to see the background on a diagonal. The horizontal lines appear too static. I don't think it's necessary to show the entire flag. |
Dec 28th |
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5 comments - 1 reply for Group 86
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12 comments - 1 reply Total
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