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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 4 |
Dec 23 |
Comment |
I like the idea of the composite image. As others have mentioned, the amputated hand bothers me. I believe that the image could be cropped to eliminate the hand and loaf of bread. While the lighting is somewhat flat you might be able to use a gradient mask on her to modify the image. You could also warm up the color balance |
Dec 31st |
| 4 |
Dec 23 |
Comment |
You definitely have mastered Florida bird photography. Having worked with you I've found that your secret is taking lots of pictures. As you know that I can't resist playing with your images, I would like to select the birds and lighten them slightly. The whites are somewhat subdued and need, in my opinion lightening. I'm not sold on the composition either. I'd have to try different compositions. |
Dec 31st |
| 4 |
Dec 23 |
Comment |
I find that the scene has a divided interest. The buildings in the background are fighting for the viewer's attention. The color adjustments really make this picture. |
Dec 31st |
| 4 |
Dec 23 |
Comment |
That's a good capture however I prefer the vertical cropped version. The strength of the lighthouse accentuates the vertical composition and eliminates any unnecessary distractions on the right side. |
Dec 31st |
| 4 |
Dec 23 |
Comment |
That's a good capture however I prefer the vertical cropped version. The strength of the lighthouse accentuates the vertical composition and eliminates any unnecessary distractions on the right side. |
Dec 31st |
| 4 |
Dec 23 |
Comment |
Well done. I'm finding that my iPhone can capture some scenes that I struggle with when I use my big boy camera. I love the composition and the colors. |
Dec 31st |
| 4 |
Dec 23 |
Comment |
Well done. The possibilities of the iPhone are endless as you have seen with my submissions. I recently learned that the iPhone is capable of 11 Trillion calculations per second and the average image is about 9 layers of data. |
Dec 31st |
7 comments - 0 replies for Group 4
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| 44 |
Dec 23 |
Comment |
Very good composition and overall technique. I would like to see the foreground area toned down somewhat. The brightness draws my attention away from the rock formations. |
Jan 2nd |
| 44 |
Dec 23 |
Comment |
Very good composition and overall technique. I would like to see the foreground area toned down somewhat. The brightness draws my attention away from the rock formations. |
Dec 31st |
| 44 |
Dec 23 |
Comment |
I like your composition. The overall blend looks great. Since the waterfall is the center of interest I would like to see some delicate and deliberate masking to bring out the waterfall and subdue some of the brighter areas. The bright area that appears to be a flat slab of concrete could be toned down too. I made some adjustments on my iPhone using Lightroom Mobile. |
Dec 31st |
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| 44 |
Dec 23 |
Comment |
I like your edits and the technique you used to control the red rocks. I'm not bothered by the use of generative fill techniques. The lone person gives a great sense of scale and depth to the composition. |
Dec 31st |
| 44 |
Dec 23 |
Comment |
Interesting perspective. Your process worked well and the results appear accurate. I would like to see the bright areas toned down with a masking brush. |
Dec 31st |
5 comments - 0 replies for Group 44
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12 comments - 0 replies Total
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